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Bankruptcy (2) (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
I waited in the lions shade for the hottest minute of the hottest hour of the hottest day, then I walked away.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.6
Overall Rank: 2303
Posted: July 6, 2004 11:50 AM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2004 11:50 AM PDT
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[9] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 6-Jul-04/12:56 PM | Reply
Run when the lions are lethargic. Good.
I think you mean lions' shade.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 204.110.228.254 > Dovina | 6-Jul-04/5:18 PM | Reply
Yes, thank you. Applestrophes and I just don't get along for some reason.
[7] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.161.194 | 6-Jul-04/11:56 PM | Reply
I was left feeling unsatisfied. ;/ Seven.
[8] edpeterson @ 68.79.1.86 | 7-Jul-04/6:14 AM | Reply
lions could use an apostrophe
[n/a] god'swife @ 209.178.158.88 | 7-Jul-04/12:26 PM | Reply
What does this mean?
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 7-Jul-04/5:15 PM | Reply
feels firm - the rhyme closes it well.
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