Re: a comment on I Love You Mildred Rogers No Matter What by cat	3-Aug-04/9:09 AM
may I take a shot?
Re: Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer	3-Aug-04/8:59 AM
I'd like to see the rythm a bit smoother. I like this.
Re: Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat	3-Aug-04/8:48 AM
You intrigue me, feline. Some help. http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=31278 You can afford to trim this, I think
Re: Mushroom Potion #9 by <{Baba^Yaga}>	2-Aug-04/5:58 AM
Did you want this to be just a bit pimply? Scary,fun.
Re: Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	1-Aug-04/6:38 AM
Are you yelling at yourself in your head? This is what confuses/bugs me about this. 8 for now.
Re: a comment on You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom	1-Aug-04/6:31 AM
Wow! Being called out by a fellow poet to fight? How fellow can he be?
Re: Barflies and Bombshells by wilco	1-Aug-04/6:27 AM
Even with the title, this works both ways. Ugh! I'm feeling girlish this morning.
Re: The Conception of a Dream by wilco	1-Aug-04/6:24 AM
I rather like it. I like the cadence but the 4th line os s-2 seems just a bit wordy. Excellent stanza though.
Re: Saturn by Bachus	31-Jul-04/8:50 AM
Quarton would be proud, i guess.
Re: Bon Voyage by Jeremi B. Handrinos	31-Jul-04/8:45 AM
Obviously, your best.
Re: Untitled. by SupremeDreamer	28-Jul-04/9:12 AM
"I could not connect- and be absorbed in a stardust high" excellent line. the rest leaves me...unkempt.
Re: Gap-Fold vs. Sour Milk by Venus	28-Jul-04/9:08 AM
Yes, I like the reform as well.
Re: The Annual January Thaw by Dovina	27-Jul-04/5:45 PM
Interesting shuffle.
Re: a comment on Cranberry shoes by INTRANSIT	27-Jul-04/5:41 PM
thank you though.
Re: a comment on Cranberry shoes by INTRANSIT	27-Jul-04/5:39 PM
Well Dovy, how long does it take human tissue, or a culture, to decompose? (ret)
Re: a comment on Cranberry shoes by INTRANSIT	27-Jul-04/5:34 PM
My original idea involved Africa. I thought it too cliche. Damn Olympics. heh.
Re: a comment on Cranberry shoes by INTRANSIT	27-Jul-04/9:44 AM
Thank you sir. How did you get to Laos from here?
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	27-Jul-04/8:42 AM
no big pompous words. cliches, used artfully almost unnoticeable. backwards works.
Re: a comment on Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT	25-Jul-04/6:53 PM
Hmmmm. My dictionary spells it with two. (American Heritage collegiate dictionary)-Houghton Mifflin '02. wanna fight about it?
Re: peanut butter sandwiches on a hot summer day by w~* ATHENA *~w	25-Jul-04/6:22 AM
If this means what I think it does, sad, very sad. Good poem though