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Barflies and Bombshells (Free verse) by wilco In the waning hours of a short-term romance;
Waiting.
Smiling.
Hoping for a last second kiss
before the bombshell drops.
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Posted: July 28, 2004 10:00 AM PDT; Last modified: July 31, 2004 4:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.2222223 Overall Rank: 960 Comments:
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Dovina @ 205.142.108.5
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28-Jul-04/10:52 AM
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May it never drop, if not from this barfly, then some other. Cheers
Why is the bombshell gonna drop? Is she drinking too heavily?
It will drop because he expects it to drop.
It will drop because she is a smothering psychopath.
Even a black widow is great fun for awhile.
Yet the web becomes thicker and thicker.
A second kiss? Not one last roll in the hay? You get the -9- points because you didn't ask for a -69- before the bombshell drops her drawers.
Even with the title, this works both ways. Ugh! I'm feeling girlish this morning.
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