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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: peanut butter sandwiches on a hot summer day (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~wfor appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! it melts into something that looks like my brother
i look at him and smile
i say brother..
you look like a peanut butter sandwich
your hair is a mess and you are melting into something that looks like
honey
its hot and we laugh
Up the ladder:
Lady in Red
Down the ladder:
Thought
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Posted: July 24, 2004 11:44 PM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2004 11:44 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7906 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.165
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25-Jul-04/6:22 AM
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If this means what I think it does, sad, very sad. Good poem though
did you spread it on toast? or did he shoot it in too deep?
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