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Cranberry shoes (Prose Poem) by INTRANSIT
Phommasanh took off his clothes, came into the
bathroom and promptly said that he'd never seen
water so hot that it foamed. I chuckled and
explained that he was taking his first bubble
bath and convinced him to test the water himself.
He dipped his hand and shot me a primary toothed smile.
He got into the tub, I grabbed a washcloth,
lathered it up, and began to wash the youth. The cloth quickly turned
dark and Phommasanh became upset exclaiming
that I was removing his pigment and that he didn't want
to end up pale like me. I chuckled again and assured him
that this was not the case. Then I gave him a quick
synopsis of how carbon dating works and he proceeded to
tell me how his mother explained that the stars told
his people how old they were and how many lifetimes they
had been through. I quietly smiled and started draining
the tub. I turned on the shower, grabbed the handle and rinsed him off .
I gave him a towel and told
Phommasanh that his "new" clothes were in the bedroom.
I went out to my small Chicago balcony and looked down
at a group of youths, heavy with gold, talking next to their booming
Mercedes. I wondered if I was doing the right thing as I looked to the
quickly darkening sky. Then I wondered how long before the stars would
tell Phommasanh
that his mother had died on the flight to America. I went
inside and flipped the television to the news. It seems sugar snap peas
are experiencing a bumper crop this year.
I'll take "Pomma" to the supermarket when he's dressed.
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Posted: July 27, 2004 6:20 AM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2004 10:06 AM PDT
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