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paperclips (Other) by son of the moon i used to build
small metal men
out of paperclips
and set their still forms
across my desk
(started with just one, at first)
but as time passed
there were fifteen, maybe twenty
of the little fuckers
all over my desk
i'd concoct battles
of ancient honor
knights desperate for the favour
of the princess
who worked in the corner
of our office
(but she wasn't really a princess)
and knights are rubbish anyways...
(i got fired from that job, eventually)
i wonder whatever
happened
to those guys?
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Posted: June 5, 2004 3:06 PM PDT; Last modified: June 5, 2004 3:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.62753 Overall Rank: 2189 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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5-Jun-04/4:50 PM
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Someone put them in the bin.
Lose the -little fuckers. and the parentheses marks.
I like it.
Heh. Nice work, sounds like something I'd do while idling at my cubicle terminal.
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