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paperclips (Other) by son of the moon
i used to build small metal men out of paperclips and set their still forms across my desk (started with just one, at first) but as time passed there were fifteen, maybe twenty of the little fuckers all over my desk i'd concoct battles of ancient honor knights desperate for the favour of the princess who worked in the corner of our office (but she wasn't really a princess) and knights are rubbish anyways... (i got fired from that job, eventually) i wonder whatever happened to those guys?

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3333335
Weighted score: 5.62753
Overall Rank: 2196
Posted: June 5, 2004 3:06 PM PDT; Last modified: June 5, 2004 3:06 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 5-Jun-04/4:50 PM | Reply
Someone put them in the bin.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.165 | 6-Jun-04/7:27 AM | Reply
Lose the -little fuckers. and the parentheses marks.
I like it.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.171.86 | 7-Jun-04/2:03 PM | Reply
Heh. Nice work, sounds like something I'd do while idling at my cubicle terminal.

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