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Those British Boys

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Apr 2004 · 1 comment

Under thin trappings of skin sliding over skin, I envision those British boys clarmoring around, throwing accents and eyelashes. The words would be lost under a thirsty wind, and flags exchanging continents could still rise and fall with a breath. Well, I never understood the charm of it all even at a tender sixteen, before all the men were metrosexuals.

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[10] Stephen Robins 7-Apr-04/2:11 AM Reply
A frightfully apt guff disseminator.