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My Soul is Stopping (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
My soul is stopping Past the hardware store Where I bought that Step-ladder so you could Put that picture of an Irish Setter Above the mantle piece My soul is stopping For a snack and a drink Because it has not eaten Since yesterday afternoon My soul is stopping To talk to a few friends about Taking a trip out of town for the weekend My soul is stopping But I will come back home
Up the ladder: Goodbye to an Individual
Down the ladder: The Gold and silver dress
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3333335
Weighted score: 5.62753
Overall Rank: 2204
Posted: December 18, 2003 4:24 PM PST; Last modified: December 18, 2003 4:24 PM PST
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Comments:
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 18-Dec-03/6:21 PM | Reply
My soul is shopping.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 18-Dec-03/9:01 PM | Reply
My soul is eating a corn dog and contemplating the hexlet.
[10] nentwined @ 66.92.28.14 | 27-Aug-04/3:28 PM | Reply
nice. -10-
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