My Soul is Stopping

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Dec 2003 · 3 comments

My soul is stopping Past the hardware store Where I bought that Step-ladder so you could Put that picture of an Irish Setter Above the mantle piece My soul is stopping For a snack and a drink Because it has not eaten Since yesterday afternoon My soul is stopping To talk to a few friends about Taking a trip out of town for the weekend My soul is stopping But I will come back home

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[7] horus8 18-Dec-03/6:21 PM Reply

My soul is shopping.

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Dec-03/9:01 PM Reply

My soul is eating a corn dog and contemplating the hexlet.

[10] nentwined 27-Aug-04/3:28 PM Reply

nice. -10-