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My Soul is Stopping (Free verse) by somemorepoetry My soul is stopping
Past the hardware store
Where I bought that
Step-ladder so you could
Put that picture of an Irish Setter
Above the mantle piece
My soul is stopping
For a snack and a drink
Because it has not eaten
Since yesterday afternoon
My soul is stopping
To talk to a few friends about
Taking a trip out of town for the weekend
My soul is stopping
But I will come back home
Up the ladder:
Observer
Down the ladder:
paperclips
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Posted: December 18, 2003 4:24 PM PST; Last modified: December 18, 2003 4:24 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.62753 Overall Rank: 2195 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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horus8 @ 24.126.116.54
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18-Dec-03/6:21 PM
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My soul is shopping.
My soul is eating a corn dog and contemplating the hexlet.
nice. -10-
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