| Re: shopper by zzinnia66 |
1-Jun-03/9:59 AM |
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I'd rather you climb down from your tree and watch a disney film for a change.:)
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| Re: Four Chapters from the Detective Plum files by horus8 |
2-Jun-03/6:41 AM |
Your armpit puncture wound has problems. namely gravity. "practically borderline nauseating" redundant?
sounds like a semi-serious writ. do it again and do it write. needs a tad more humor if thats what you're trying to do.my <.02. that is all.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Jun-03/7:15 AM |
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Do you remember the Rollercoaster discussion from the movie "parenthood"? I can't make you stay, nor would I try. I would however, recommend you strap in and just enjoy the ride. The good stuff here at P/R is not what you see up front. You have to travel the catacoombs and back halls and secret rooms. There is a veritable plethora of wealth hidden deep within. YOU have to search for it. Which is An importand part of poetry. Discovery.
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| Re: Interview with a Steven King by Bachus |
3-Jun-03/7:30 AM |
So tell me, Senator, where does one go when the off, and strange have been so well wrappered by you and the nappied one? WAIT! I know! No ones done the Rockettes!
YES! I'm off to Radio City Music Hall!!!!
Intransit grabs coat, flails the door open, rushes into the street kneecapping himself on the firehydrant, falls back first into the middle of the street only to have a purple smurf ascend from the manhole (thats a funny word) and yell "Whats all the ruckus?! Me and the Mrs. was gettin' it on when you completely stifled my stiffie, man!"
Smurf pokes intransit in the eye with a rolodex.
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| Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
5-Jun-03/7:20 AM |
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| Re: Taliban Ambush by scitz |
5-Jun-03/7:21 AM |
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dingdingdingding!! We have a winner!!!
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| Re: Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw |
5-Jun-03/7:27 AM |
No. He's a 600 cubic inch supercharged JP-4 injected Hemi powered steamroller with rubber edged drive wheel.
And if you get in his way, well that's your own damn fault.
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| Re: wish by daniella |
5-Jun-03/7:33 AM |
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| Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jun-03/5:41 PM |
Ok. so, if my catamaran, which sadly, sank,(there's a hunnert mousuits looking for it now) is an ode, then this scU-REAMS LYRICS!!! Hello-o? anybody listening? no? fine. whatever.
great piece. drop the 'splaining. go.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Jun-03/5:58 PM |
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For some reason this feels so... un-you. I dunno.... lemme think.
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| Re: Angels & Dinosaurs by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Jun-03/6:30 AM |
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The repetetive-ness monster is here. I know you write a phenomenal amount and that you've allowed yourself to be distracted for the moment. IF you like these scribblings, then do them a propellor thing they deserve.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jun-03/6:32 AM |
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like I always say, less is more.
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| Re: Break Down by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Jun-03/6:41 AM |
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My friends engine dropped a valve once. he brought it home in a bucket that night. 3 for the rod. 3 for the ex "hero" 2 for Merle, 2$ for a stiff cup of coffee.
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| Re: Bad habits & tramps by horus8 |
6-Jun-03/5:02 PM |
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people just don't listen, do they?
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| Re: A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm |
6-Jun-03/5:08 PM |
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(click) goes the numerator.
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| Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
7-Jun-03/6:32 AM |
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I think you can leave it for a while. Judging by the other you just posted, you're bottling up a bit.
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| Re: The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8 |
7-Jun-03/6:42 AM |
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a smoothe read. emphasis on smooth. cool form. You've reached a new level for yourself here. GQT again.
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| Re: Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
7-Jun-03/6:50 AM |
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No. Scooby's my dog. close enough.
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| Re: Stopped by zzinnia66 |
7-Jun-03/6:53 AM |
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another challenge to my thought processes. damn.
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| Re: Thracian mountains until the Sea by Shardik |
7-Jun-03/6:57 AM |
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