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22-May-03/4:47 AM |
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For some reason I am just now getting to this final? draft. I see you put the volvo back in. thank you.
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| Re: Those Without Graves by Wulf |
24-May-03/8:45 PM |
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Too tired to pick nits. Worth the read, definitely.
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24-May-03/8:54 PM |
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Ok now. Make sure you pull this before I have a chance to decipher the latin. God knows we can't have any edumacated truck drivers running willy-nilly like all over the poemranker now, can we.
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| Re: Para Metres by Blue Magpie |
25-May-03/4:29 PM |
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Just read it aloud to yourself, then tweak thebeats that go bump. it'll be perfect. loved it.
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26-May-03/7:01 PM |
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Lets attach this to my tingling poem and see how many heads explode.
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| Re: Hold That Pose by Wulf |
26-May-03/7:08 PM |
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1mc. This is not your captain speaking. The baby is drowning. I repeat. The baby is bowling. That is all.
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| Re: The last of the sworn heels by Bachus |
28-May-03/4:59 AM |
I must give you back your golden Q-Tip award for this.
The awards I ordered didn't make it through the firefight.
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| Re: the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub |
28-May-03/5:05 AM |
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I'm glad to have to vote again. If I'm reading this right, it is positioned as a reversal of events.
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| Re: Cliche by Blue Magpie |
28-May-03/5:14 AM |
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| Re: At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
28-May-03/2:05 PM |
way to go, Guitarzan. Now, what did you do with the Electric Frankenstein?
whoops. there i go again.
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| Re: Plastic Posies by BleedingRose |
28-May-03/2:09 PM |
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You're bringing her a plastic eye? What? Maybe she'd like a nice neck brace.
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29-May-03/6:20 AM |
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A nice diversion from you. you were missed. Dangerous with that winking navel, you.
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29-May-03/6:25 AM |
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More depth than t'other. Nice to know you're still out there:)
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| Re: Pass the salt, Peter by Bachus |
29-May-03/3:20 PM |
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| Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose |
30-May-03/5:28 PM |
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Do you read your own, or have some one read it aloud to you? It's a BIG help if you don't. Sounds a bit repetetive to me. I like the summary.
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| Re: Luekemia Tacosalad by Shardik |
30-May-03/5:51 PM |
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Open mike with a mellow random Sax backdrop.
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31-May-03/7:56 AM |
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i don't know what to say. excellent. any poem that makes me think, i like.
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| Re: I shot speed by horus8 |
31-May-03/8:15 AM |
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Good. Now I don't have to get lit up and drive like a Silverback on Silverleaves for the sake of growing a curbless days.
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| Re: Stopped by zzinnia66 |
1-Jun-03/9:22 AM |
Guess i'd better getthehellouttayourway.
Gimme my tiki back!
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| Re: There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8 |
1-Jun-03/9:42 AM |
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So long ago I read this. too immature to fully appreciate its product. It's fermenting well in my cask.
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