on some deleted poem
22 May 2003, 4:47 AM
For some reason I am just now getting to this final? draft. I see you put the volvo back in. thank you.
on Those Without Graves by Wulf
24 May 2003, 8:45 PM
Too tired to pick nits. Worth the read, definitely.
on some deleted poem
24 May 2003, 8:54 PM
Ok now. Make sure you pull this before I have a chance to decipher the latin. God knows we can't have any edumacated truck drivers running willy-nilly like all over the poemranker now, can we.
on Para Metres by Blue Magpie
25 May 2003, 4:29 PM
Just read it aloud to yourself, then tweak thebeats that go bump. it'll be perfect. loved it.
on some deleted poem
26 May 2003, 7:01 PM
Lets attach this to my tingling poem and see how many heads explode.
on Hold That Pose by Wulf
26 May 2003, 7:08 PM
1mc. This is not your captain speaking. The baby is drowning. I repeat. The baby is bowling. That is all.
on The last of the sworn heels by Bachus
28 May 2003, 4:59 AM
I must give you back your golden Q-Tip award for this.
The awards I ordered didn't make it through the firefight.
The awards I ordered didn't make it through the firefight.
on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub
28 May 2003, 5:05 AM
I'm glad to have to vote again. If I'm reading this right, it is positioned as a reversal of events.
on Cliche by Blue Magpie
28 May 2003, 5:14 AM
Bingo.
on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>
28 May 2003, 2:05 PM
way to go, Guitarzan. Now, what did you do with the Electric Frankenstein?
whoops. there i go again.
whoops. there i go again.
on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose
28 May 2003, 2:09 PM
You're bringing her a plastic eye? What? Maybe she'd like a nice neck brace.
on some deleted poem
29 May 2003, 6:20 AM
A nice diversion from you. you were missed. Dangerous with that winking navel, you.
on some deleted poem
29 May 2003, 6:25 AM
More depth than t'other. Nice to know you're still out there:)
on Pass the salt, Peter by Bachus
29 May 2003, 3:20 PM
You always do.
on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
30 May 2003, 5:28 PM
Do you read your own, or have some one read it aloud to you? It's a BIG help if you don't. Sounds a bit repetetive to me. I like the summary.
on Luekemia Tacosalad by Shardik
30 May 2003, 5:51 PM
Open mike with a mellow random Sax backdrop.
on some deleted poem
31 May 2003, 7:56 AM
i don't know what to say. excellent. any poem that makes me think, i like.
on I shot speed by horus8
31 May 2003, 8:15 AM
Good. Now I don't have to get lit up and drive like a Silverback on Silverleaves for the sake of growing a curbless days.
on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8
1 Jun 2003, 9:42 AM
So long ago I read this. too immature to fully appreciate its product. It's fermenting well in my cask.