on My Children Will by daniella
19 May 2003, 7:03 PM
The trees like it when they are plundered by little feats with feet.
on some deleted poem
19 May 2003, 7:12 PM
dAMNit girl. Hell yes. and to think I like 'im. Spun well.
on may 18 by Bill Z Bub
19 May 2003, 7:15 PM
Fuck yeah! drop the (lived fast) and let it off the leash!!!
on on missing the bus by Bill Z Bub
19 May 2003, 7:32 PM
boy, when you come back, you come BACK!
on My Enemy by tacochick1666
19 May 2003, 7:37 PM
Don't be depressed. The Penna is gorgeous this time of year. I would know. I've caroused your roadways many a time. Go climb a tree. I'm not kidding, you'll feel better.
on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig
20 May 2003, 6:28 AM
From a poetic standpoint: tangible(comma)even
drop the (but)last line of s-2. I read this aloud and almost cried. I think this is destined to knock me off.
I'm inspired to do some houscleaning on "tingling".
drop the (but)last line of s-2. I read this aloud and almost cried. I think this is destined to knock me off.
I'm inspired to do some houscleaning on "tingling".
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 9:54 AM
spun around and passed out did ya? killer ending. I needed a laugh. Thanks.
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 3:21 PM
Hmmmm. Failure and sucess at the same time. Does physics have a term for that? Imust go and read your other items and then quickly proceed to the surgeon general and have my stomach stapled. Not collecting 200 dollars of course.
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 3:24 PM
bluntly, enjoyably, wonderful. why am I bleedeng?
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 3:26 PM
Damn boomerangs.
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 3:29 PM
I don't care if you skillet me with a Buick. Just keep me laughing.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 9:03 AM
if i brought you the button, woud you push it? I bet not.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 9:14 AM
I think, Horus and Bachus should alternate caning and throwing rock salt at you. Then, Duct tape you into a ball, dunk you in lighter fluid and roll you onto the interstate, in front of.... A TWIN STEER AXLE ARTICULATED COACH BUS!!!!!!! articulate that.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:35 AM
What happens when you give a blowfish a Tuba? What then? See what kind of trouble you can get into with this type of thing? Leave it alone, before someone gets hurt.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:37 AM
Inspiration is where you find it. Isn't a Beer Stein to the head a symbol of good luck?
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 3:46 PM
I didn't know the Tughampton boy had a dog. I'd a brought it a bottle of Chivas.
Which thing? The hound or the boy? Does the wheeled chair need oiled?
Which thing? The hound or the boy? Does the wheeled chair need oiled?
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 3:51 PM
death behind a furry furrowed brow. ouch.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 7:43 PM
Psyclical.
on Warmth by shwenatjadeflower
21 May 2003, 7:45 PM
Were you attempting a villanelle?