| Re: My Children Will by daniella |
19-May-03/7:03 PM |
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The trees like it when they are plundered by little feats with feet.
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19-May-03/7:12 PM |
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dAMNit girl. Hell yes. and to think I like 'im. Spun well.
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| Re: may 18 by Bill Z Bub |
19-May-03/7:15 PM |
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Fuck yeah! drop the (lived fast) and let it off the leash!!!
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| Re: on missing the bus by Bill Z Bub |
19-May-03/7:32 PM |
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boy, when you come back, you come BACK!
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| Re: My Enemy by tacochick1666 |
19-May-03/7:37 PM |
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Don't be depressed. The Penna is gorgeous this time of year. I would know. I've caroused your roadways many a time. Go climb a tree. I'm not kidding, you'll feel better.
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| Re: The Order Of Things by Mr Pig |
20-May-03/6:28 AM |
From a poetic standpoint: tangible(comma)even
drop the (but)last line of s-2. I read this aloud and almost cried. I think this is destined to knock me off.
I'm inspired to do some houscleaning on "tingling".
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20-May-03/9:54 AM |
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spun around and passed out did ya? killer ending. I needed a laugh. Thanks.
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20-May-03/3:21 PM |
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Hmmmm. Failure and sucess at the same time. Does physics have a term for that? Imust go and read your other items and then quickly proceed to the surgeon general and have my stomach stapled. Not collecting 200 dollars of course.
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20-May-03/3:24 PM |
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bluntly, enjoyably, wonderful. why am I bleedeng?
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20-May-03/3:26 PM |
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20-May-03/3:29 PM |
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I don't care if you skillet me with a Buick. Just keep me laughing.
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21-May-03/9:03 AM |
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if i brought you the button, woud you push it? I bet not.
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21-May-03/9:14 AM |
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I think, Horus and Bachus should alternate caning and throwing rock salt at you. Then, Duct tape you into a ball, dunk you in lighter fluid and roll you onto the interstate, in front of.... A TWIN STEER AXLE ARTICULATED COACH BUS!!!!!!! articulate that.
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21-May-03/10:35 AM |
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What happens when you give a blowfish a Tuba? What then? See what kind of trouble you can get into with this type of thing? Leave it alone, before someone gets hurt.
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21-May-03/10:37 AM |
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Inspiration is where you find it. Isn't a Beer Stein to the head a symbol of good luck?
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| Re: Dr. Dr. by psikosis |
21-May-03/3:42 PM |
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21-May-03/3:46 PM |
I didn't know the Tughampton boy had a dog. I'd a brought it a bottle of Chivas.
Which thing? The hound or the boy? Does the wheeled chair need oiled?
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21-May-03/3:51 PM |
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death behind a furry furrowed brow. ouch.
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21-May-03/7:43 PM |
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| Re: Warmth by shwenatjadeflower |
21-May-03/7:45 PM |
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Were you attempting a villanelle?
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