poemranker ::Stopped by zzinnia66

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Free verse № 51006

Stopped

Member since 2003 · Posted 31 May 2003 · Edited 6 Jun 2003 · 6 comments

Again, with the there, then I did-- and the instrument’s half-life, unlike shoes or cars or tools or pens-- extends when I think on you. She frogs-up when I'm all toady, resting padded, encased. You cripple me with your eloquent simplicity. My long thoughts plus your oh, so short answers equals polished, finished, finely figured and, down to the last digit, nimble, (keeping your shoes on, of course) a sum some one ought to. See? It's mute.

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[7] Bachus 1-Jun-03/12:02 AM Reply
greenlight district
[10] INTRANSIT 1-Jun-03/9:22 AM Reply
Guess i'd better getthehellouttayourway.


Gimme my tiki back!
[8] god'swife 6-Jun-03/10:26 AM Reply
"She frogs when I'm all toady" what a fuckin' great line. I'm not sure what it means, but that's ok. this is one sublimely angry poem. Your one hot sister.
[n/a] zzinnia66 › god'swife 6-Jun-03/9:03 PM Reply
have another look, would you mrs.g?
[9] Bill Z Bub 6-Jun-03/5:14 PM Reply
mind if i slide into this clique and dish up a scoopful of panegyrics?
[10] INTRANSIT 7-Jun-03/6:53 AM Reply
another challenge to my thought processes. damn.