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Stopped (Free verse) by zzinnia66
Again, with the there, then I did--
and the instrumentâs half-life, unlike
shoes or cars or tools or pens--
extends when I think on you.
She frogs-up when I'm all toady,
resting padded, encased.
You cripple me with your eloquent simplicity.
My long thoughts plus
your oh, so short answers
equals polished, finished, finely figured and,
down to the last digit, nimble,
(keeping your shoes on, of course)
a sum some one ought to.
See? It's mute.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9433
Posted: May 31, 2003 11:42 PM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2003 9:03 PM PDT
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