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Then again who really fucked me over (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
Goddamn it you bastard Why the hell do you hate me You're the mother fucking one You raised me like this I'll get you for every time You yelled I'll get you for every time You gave me a sip I'll get you for every time You blamed it on me Now that you think I'm The worst mistake You ever made Whatcha gonna do with me Go ahead I can tell that You want to give up Come on fucker Now that you've found out I'm gonna push harder Get rid of me you prick What do you think it is You're trying to do I'll break you're will Make you feel insane Why do you go through all this Just to change your Daughters life

Up the ladder: winter bloom
Down the ladder: Stopped

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9432
Posted: May 27, 2003 7:14 PM PDT; Last modified: May 27, 2003 7:14 PM PDT
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[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-May-03/8:12 PM | Reply
The pepsi challenge beats tab in the polls.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-May-03/8:42 AM | Reply
hyperbole
[6] Dan garcia-Black @ 68.120.42.72 | 5-Apr-04/5:15 PM | Reply
Passionate.
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