| Re: Liar by Babigurly69 |
8-Jun-03/6:26 PM |
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I've held back long enough. Another fresh faced danger teen has arrived. INCOMING!!!!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Jun-03/6:10 AM |
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Do yourself a favor, and stop with the b.s.. Just focus on your writing skills and earn the respect you want. I had to. and I'm not done yet, either. Just a note. If I think a poem is 5 or less, I won't score it.
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| Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
9-Jun-03/6:20 AM |
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I had Zebra rubbers on my headgear. I hated braces.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Jun-03/3:35 PM |
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LIFT THAT BARGE!!!! TOTE THAT BALE!!!!
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| Re: Roadside Testimony by groovenmove |
10-Jun-03/3:56 PM |
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Nice fro, bro. Now mash yer motor.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Jun-03/1:03 PM |
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are you studying a specific style of poetry? feels like it. I do like your writing though.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Jun-03/11:53 AM |
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Maybe, nope, you covered that too. I always make sure there are plenty of portable janitors available.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Jun-03/11:55 AM |
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| Re: Coloured waifs home by horus8 |
12-Jun-03/11:59 AM |
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| Re: Ga-go, Part two of that same play, the suspensefull climax. by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
12-Jun-03/12:50 PM |
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really? no, rely. Anywho, I'll bare my balls that you may kick them, firmedly. go for the hook. open with the fencing scene, then backtrack to the birthday party. I am jealous. I am blonde. i am erect? was not was. 10 because you put FORT into this. yes. encore.
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12-Jun-03/12:58 PM |
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| Re: Warlocks by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
12-Jun-03/1:04 PM |
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hazards coming back to hazard you.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Jun-03/2:01 PM |
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i might also go for (then) instead of (the). My apologies,btw. didn't read your file first.
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| Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 |
12-Jun-03/6:09 PM |
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froot loop. pimple is correct though.
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| Re: Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
12-Jun-03/6:11 PM |
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an olympic swimmer next to the rope lane divider?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Jun-03/6:19 PM |
what the hell is all that nonsense on yer p/r homepage?
do you really believe that? I don't.
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| Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 |
12-Jun-03/6:33 PM |
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am I gay if I associate with the lot of ya?
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| Re: Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus |
12-Jun-03/6:43 PM |
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I remember when I used to do that.lol.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Jun-03/6:50 PM |
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yes this brings it much closer. the reader is not distracted as much I think.
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| Re: Dirge by Nicholas Jones |
13-Jun-03/8:01 AM |
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battling the atrophy of a learned response culture.
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