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20 most recent comments by INTRANSIT (1061-1080)

Re: Liar by Babigurly69 8-Jun-03/6:26 PM
I've held back long enough. Another fresh faced danger teen has arrived. INCOMING!!!!
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Jun-03/6:10 AM
Do yourself a favor, and stop with the b.s.. Just focus on your writing skills and earn the respect you want. I had to. and I'm not done yet, either. Just a note. If I think a poem is 5 or less, I won't score it.
Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 9-Jun-03/6:20 AM
I had Zebra rubbers on my headgear. I hated braces.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Jun-03/3:35 PM
LIFT THAT BARGE!!!! TOTE THAT BALE!!!!
Re: Roadside Testimony by groovenmove 10-Jun-03/3:56 PM
Nice fro, bro. Now mash yer motor.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Jun-03/1:03 PM
are you studying a specific style of poetry? feels like it. I do like your writing though.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Jun-03/11:53 AM
Maybe, nope, you covered that too. I always make sure there are plenty of portable janitors available.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Jun-03/11:55 AM
3rd to 2nd person?
Re: Coloured waifs home by horus8 12-Jun-03/11:59 AM
right on the head.
Re: Ga-go, Part two of that same play, the suspensefull climax. by Jeremi B. Handrinos 12-Jun-03/12:50 PM
really? no, rely. Anywho, I'll bare my balls that you may kick them, firmedly. go for the hook. open with the fencing scene, then backtrack to the birthday party. I am jealous. I am blonde. i am erect? was not was. 10 because you put FORT into this. yes. encore.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Jun-03/12:58 PM
drop the last line.
Re: Warlocks by <{Baba^Yaga}> 12-Jun-03/1:04 PM
hazards coming back to hazard you.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Jun-03/2:01 PM
i might also go for (then) instead of (the). My apologies,btw. didn't read your file first.
Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 12-Jun-03/6:09 PM
froot loop. pimple is correct though.
Re: Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom 12-Jun-03/6:11 PM
an olympic swimmer next to the rope lane divider?
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Jun-03/6:19 PM
what the hell is all that nonsense on yer p/r homepage?
do you really believe that? I don't.
Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 12-Jun-03/6:33 PM
am I gay if I associate with the lot of ya?
Re: Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus 12-Jun-03/6:43 PM
I remember when I used to do that.lol.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Jun-03/6:50 PM
yes this brings it much closer. the reader is not distracted as much I think.
Re: Dirge by Nicholas Jones 13-Jun-03/8:01 AM
battling the atrophy of a learned response culture.


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