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Liar (Other) by Babigurly69
The knife you stuck in my back was really sharp The pain seeped through my skin and deep into my heart What can I say But I loved you a lot I was true and gave you all I got How can you steep as low as the ground When you were the one lifting me up when I was down How can you sleep knowing your wrong How can you eat knowing Im gone I guess I didnt mean as much to you as I thought You used me and put me back on the shelf like something you bought You told me you loved me I knew it was a lie You said it to get what you want, your a typical guy Now that Im through with these corny ass boys Ill pick my head up and keep on moving Thats my only choice.

Up the ladder: Biological Excuse
Down the ladder: Forget

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11851
Posted: June 8, 2003 6:33 AM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2003 6:33 AM PDT
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Comments:
[4] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Jun-03/2:23 PM | Reply
You are, YOU ARE! not "your". "Your a typical guy" So are you, isn't that keen, also, once again "your" is you're, idiot.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 8-Jun-03/6:26 PM | Reply
I've held back long enough. Another fresh faced danger teen has arrived. INCOMING!!!!
[4] anyone @ 172.163.179.37 | 10-Apr-04/2:16 PM | Reply
More like a top-40 song than a poem
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