| Re: Equality by Freethinker1602 |
26-Jul-03/5:48 PM |
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Go to the bookstore. Buy a copy of "Poetry for dummies". Rub it against your genitalia. It's cheaper than a hooker, and feels better. Trust me. I drive a truck. LOL.!
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| Re: Departing Suburbia by Caducus |
26-Jul-03/5:52 PM |
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But hey, if you've got six pack abs, you're good to go right? right? Fine job pardno. Good to see you're still pluggin'
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| Re: Departing Suburbia by Caducus |
27-Jul-03/9:48 AM |
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Sorry, I was a little un-sober during my last comment. Not always a good thing. I particularly liked the just above freezing temp. Choosing to keep things "fluid". If only punching grandfather clocks would do the trick, eh?
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| Re: CrapBeer by DurtKL |
27-Jul-03/9:54 AM |
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I hang with the Canadian crew meself.
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| Re: Colgate & Paper towels by Bachus |
27-Jul-03/9:57 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Jul-03/3:58 PM |
I'm terribly sure I can
For I am not and never will be a "backdoor man".
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| Re: Some die waiting, or laugh forgetting by Shardik |
29-Jul-03/6:16 AM |
You and that other chick have already conquered the day.
It's only 8 a.m.
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| Re: After seven days in the sun by <~> |
29-Jul-03/6:18 AM |
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I'm somewhere between lost and found at the corner of walk and don't walk.
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| Re: The Longest Wait (Revised) by Caducus |
30-Jul-03/5:39 AM |
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Um, Caducus? You feelin' okay man? The last few poems have a down beat to them.
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| Re: DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
30-Jul-03/5:42 AM |
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| Re: Beauty within by geewhiz1962 |
30-Jul-03/5:44 AM |
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It may be pimply around the edges, it's almost spot on in rythm and has a mature message. there's potential here.
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| Re: Seeing Clearly in the Dark by Jimbo |
30-Jul-03/5:55 AM |
The bad news: S-3 I don't like. S-1 curdling sky/clear sky. keep the curdling. overall, a bit too much. overdone.
The good news: You are tucked under a swans wing. paddle gently. listen to her rhythm. she will share her feathers. best of luck.
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| Re: Sonnet for a Suicide by <~> |
30-Jul-03/6:08 AM |
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Did you tamper with the rhyme scheme? I know of two types of sonnetts and this doesn't fit either.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Jul-03/6:16 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-03/9:10 AM |
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When you're ready to add to this, Keep it up as long as you can. Kill them. Kill them all.
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| Re: Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Jul-03/9:16 AM |
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Loved it! I usually give folks th pinkie. I don't care enough to send the very best.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-03/9:19 AM |
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I don't like the (Shakespear). Put it with the misquoted words. That is all.
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| Re: We'll be Louvers and shade by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
31-Jul-03/5:29 PM |
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sit down. you're gonna pull something.
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| Re: Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit |
2-Aug-03/6:14 PM |
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poetand KOnwit? Boy, I can't wait to see THIS smackdown.
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| Re: Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Aug-03/1:30 PM |
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Hi there! I'm an Apteryx. A wingless bird with hairy feathers! How may I be of assistance?
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