on Equality by Freethinker1602
26 Jul 2003, 5:48 PM
Go to the bookstore. Buy a copy of "Poetry for dummies". Rub it against your genitalia. It's cheaper than a hooker, and feels better. Trust me. I drive a truck. LOL.!
on Departing Suburbia by Caducus
26 Jul 2003, 5:52 PM
But hey, if you've got six pack abs, you're good to go right? right? Fine job pardno. Good to see you're still pluggin'
on Departing Suburbia by Caducus
27 Jul 2003, 9:48 AM
Sorry, I was a little un-sober during my last comment. Not always a good thing. I particularly liked the just above freezing temp. Choosing to keep things "fluid". If only punching grandfather clocks would do the trick, eh?
on Colgate & Paper towels by Bachus
27 Jul 2003, 9:57 AM
Bangin' on the belt.
on some deleted poem
27 Jul 2003, 3:58 PM
I'm terribly sure I can
For I am not and never will be a "backdoor man".
For I am not and never will be a "backdoor man".
on Some die waiting, or laugh forgetting by Shardik
29 Jul 2003, 6:16 AM
You and that other chick have already conquered the day.
It's only 8 a.m.
It's only 8 a.m.
on After seven days in the sun by <~>
29 Jul 2003, 6:18 AM
I'm somewhere between lost and found at the corner of walk and don't walk.
on The Longest Wait (Revised) by Caducus
30 Jul 2003, 5:39 AM
Um, Caducus? You feelin' okay man? The last few poems have a down beat to them.
on DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos
30 Jul 2003, 5:42 AM
lol
on Beauty within by geewhiz1962
30 Jul 2003, 5:44 AM
It may be pimply around the edges, it's almost spot on in rythm and has a mature message. there's potential here.
on Seeing Clearly in the Dark by Jimbo
30 Jul 2003, 5:55 AM
The bad news: S-3 I don't like. S-1 curdling sky/clear sky. keep the curdling. overall, a bit too much. overdone.
The good news: You are tucked under a swans wing. paddle gently. listen to her rhythm. she will share her feathers. best of luck.
The good news: You are tucked under a swans wing. paddle gently. listen to her rhythm. she will share her feathers. best of luck.
on Sonnet for a Suicide by <~>
30 Jul 2003, 6:08 AM
Did you tamper with the rhyme scheme? I know of two types of sonnetts and this doesn't fit either.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2003, 6:16 AM
A valiant effort. keep pluggin'.
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Buy a copy of poetry for dummies. No kidding. I own one. it'll cost ya twenty smackers:)
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i
Buy a copy of poetry for dummies. No kidding. I own one. it'll cost ya twenty smackers:)
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2003, 9:10 AM
When you're ready to add to this, Keep it up as long as you can. Kill them. Kill them all.
on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer
31 Jul 2003, 9:16 AM
Loved it! I usually give folks th pinkie. I don't care enough to send the very best.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2003, 9:19 AM
I don't like the (Shakespear). Put it with the misquoted words. That is all.
on We'll be Louvers and shade by <{Baba^Yaga}>
31 Jul 2003, 5:29 PM
sit down. you're gonna pull something.
on Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit
2 Aug 2003, 6:14 PM
poetand KOnwit? Boy, I can't wait to see THIS smackdown.
on Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Aug 2003, 1:30 PM
Hi there! I'm an Apteryx. A wingless bird with hairy feathers! How may I be of assistance?