Haiku № 57568

Colgate & Paper towels

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Jul 2003 · Edited 26 Jul 2003 · 4 comments

"She was fun to fuck" I blurt out in express line Day dreamer shopping. "What?" Says the cashier. "What!? I snap back, "Whatever" She chirps, "cash or credit?" "Both"... "What?"... "You heard me" "Paper, or plastic" "Both" "What?" "Both"... "Freak" "Bitch" "Wacko" "Child" "Daddy" "Mamma" "Poppy!" "ROSA!" LOVE wont wait for you to count change.

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4 comments

[8] Don-Quixote 26-Jul-03/3:15 PM Reply

wtf... lol! blessed with 8.

[9] 68.75.19.117 26-Jul-03/6:07 PM Reply

exciting!

[9] http://mulberryfairy 26-Jul-03/7:06 PM Reply

A lovely drama. I like the little moral at the end.

[8] INTRANSIT 27-Jul-03/9:57 AM Reply

Bangin' on the belt.