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Colgate & Paper towels (Haiku) by Bachus
"She was fun to fuck" I blurt out in express line Day dreamer shopping. "What?" Says the cashier. "What!? I snap back, "Whatever" She chirps, "cash or credit?" "Both"... "What?"... "You heard me" "Paper, or plastic" "Both" "What?" "Both"... "Freak" "Bitch" "Wacko" "Child" "Daddy" "Mamma" "Poppy!" "ROSA!" LOVE wont wait for you to count change.
Up the ladder: Despair
Down the ladder: Ash
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.769231
Weighted score: 6.2934113
Overall Rank: 886
Posted: July 25, 2003 3:21 PM PDT; Last modified: July 26, 2003 12:47 PM PDT
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[8] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.168.100 | 26-Jul-03/3:15 PM | Reply
wtf... lol! blessed with 8.
[9] 68.75.19.117 @ 68.75.20.183 | 26-Jul-03/6:07 PM | Reply
exciting!
[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.146.29 | 26-Jul-03/7:06 PM | Reply
A lovely drama. I like the little moral at the end.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 27-Jul-03/9:57 AM | Reply
Bangin' on the belt.
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