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Colgate & Paper towels (Haiku) by Bachus

"She was fun to fuck" I blurt out in express line Day dreamer shopping. "What?" Says the cashier. "What!? I snap back, "Whatever" She chirps, "cash or credit?" "Both"... "What?"... "You heard me" "Paper, or plastic" "Both" "What?" "Both"... "Freak" "Bitch" "Wacko" "Child" "Daddy" "Mamma" "Poppy!" "ROSA!" LOVE wont wait for you to count change.

http://mulberryfairy 26-Jul-03/7:06 PM
A lovely drama. I like the little moral at the end.




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