on Hot Potato by Shardik
19 Jun 2003, 6:06 AM
yer killin' me.
on some deleted poem
19 Jun 2003, 6:10 AM
he shoulda bitch slapped the guy. point taken.
on some deleted poem
19 Jun 2003, 6:14 AM
done.
on The irony of the dark continent by zzinnia66
19 Jun 2003, 5:17 PM
Anchor down! You've weathered worse!
This new home seeks nature terse.
For thither come, has their nurse,
good will come, from you, disperse.
This new home seeks nature terse.
For thither come, has their nurse,
good will come, from you, disperse.
on I'll Just Have a Salad by jessicazee
20 Jun 2003, 6:34 AM
Good job Jess. Alittle more serious than others you've written. Say, I've been looking for an open mic spot in Milwaukee, ain't found one yet. you?
on some deleted poem
20 Jun 2003, 6:38 AM
definitely different. fun-ny.
on Detox by OneFingerAnswer
20 Jun 2003, 6:52 AM
Read it aloud to yourself and grind off the speed bumps. They're small but will make it better to read.
on Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8
20 Jun 2003, 7:41 AM
This one time I'm saying: over the top. too much. repetetively twisted. Honestly, cut it back.
or don't. wash your car with it.
or don't. wash your car with it.
on Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte by <{Baba^Yaga}>
4 Jul 2003, 4:50 PM
Nobody does it better. Nebarska. No a/c.
Hotel 'puter. Shouldst I say HOSTILE?
Life sucks without the 'ranker.
Hotel 'puter. Shouldst I say HOSTILE?
Life sucks without the 'ranker.
on 910 Via Padova, Claremont, Ca. (Mike Piazza Edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
8 Jul 2003, 12:38 PM
Smokin' the hides is always cool!
on some deleted poem
13 Jul 2003, 11:55 AM
Can't wait to get home so I can absorb the good stuff instead of one-timing it. prevote=8
on Strippers by <{Baba^Yaga}>
13 Jul 2003, 11:57 AM
You'll have a little of that from time to time.
on Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66
15 Jul 2003, 5:44 AM
Hey Z! Glad you're ok! Did you see yourself when you wrote this? You should have. Sorry to hear Africa wasn't quite. But you went! Kudos! Now why this isn't getting better scores is beyond me. Even without the helicopter info, it's all there. Gotta run. Kisses! kisses!
on rainday by Bill Z Bub
17 Jul 2003, 2:18 PM
More fun than humans should be allowed to have. Miss you guys and gals like the dickens. Who invented that line anyway? Big numbers!
on Yellow Star by Mr Pig
22 Jul 2003, 5:43 AM
Nice discussion, gentlemen. Wish I had time to read it all. when I get home. Amazing how much impact one day, minute , hour, moment, second, can have.
on I am the gayest by walrus8
22 Jul 2003, 5:45 AM
You would. Why not Mr Putz?
on summers children by w~* ATHENA *~w
22 Jul 2003, 5:49 AM
This is good. needs a tweak but I can't quite figure where yet.
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2003, 1:53 PM
whiskey for my men, beer for my horses.
on some deleted poem
26 Jul 2003, 4:33 PM
You say farmer. most of what is farmed is green monochromatic.....oh I don't know what the hell i'm talking about. nevermind.
on Kakistocracy by <{Baba^Yaga}>
26 Jul 2003, 5:33 PM
like it or not, it likes to be not. because it's not like it's not or, it depends on what your definition of the word "is " is. wtf? lol!!!!!