poemranker ::summers children by ~* ATHENA *~

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Free verse № 57009

summers children

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Jul 2003 · 1 comment

there was a big bump on my elbow i thought it was an idea but it was only a bite from a spider under my bed. there was a sunburn on my head i thought it was an idea but it was only an itch after a day at the beach. there was a scratch on my knee i thought it was something bleeding but it was only one of those spills on my bike. there was a flavor of ice in my mouth i thought it was something cold but it was only the taste of what I will become. there was the memory of riding the swing i thought it was me free And it was.

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[7] INTRANSIT 22-Jul-03/5:49 AM Reply
This is good. needs a tweak but I can't quite figure where yet.