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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award:
for appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising.
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summers children (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w
there was a big bump on my elbow i thought it was an idea but it was only a bite from a spider under my bed. there was a sunburn on my head i thought it was an idea but it was only an itch after a day at the beach. there was a scratch on my knee i thought it was something bleeding but it was only one of those spills on my bike. there was a flavor of ice in my mouth i thought it was something cold but it was only the taste of what I will become. there was the memory of riding the swing i thought it was me free And it was.

Up the ladder: At Peace
Down the ladder: Untitled

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7875
Posted: July 21, 2003 10:42 PM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2003 10:42 PM PDT
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[7] INTRANSIT @ 204.110.225.254 | 22-Jul-03/5:49 AM | Reply
This is good. needs a tweak but I can't quite figure where yet.
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