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Yellow Star

by Mr Pig

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Jul 2003 · Edited 21 Jul 2003 · 31 comments

Yellow stars in a pit of faces, Staring transfixed from their tomb, At their possessions neatly stacked by ‘perfect mortals’ Suitcases aligned outside the shower room, Emblazoned in names or chalk epitaphs, That stands beside a leather mountain of heels. The drone of a single shaver, Removing the perfect hair, That will be used for textiles to seam more yellow stars, The sick irony of death bearing death, And the whooping cough of a typhoid stricken child, Walking with her mother mild, To the room of no return. In the shower room I sit half a century on, Thinking of the nameless gone, In this room I recall the Mothers, Who would try to help their babies breathe By making them suckle on desperate nipples, Both dying in the shape that they lived in the womb, Where screams turned to smoke that would bellow for hours, I break down in the shower room. I remain haunted by the corrugated corridors, The squeak and lingering echo of recycled boots on shiny floors, Where laughing Nazis would walk to block 11, To purify Jews by liquid suffocation, I see a name carved in to granite, Next to rows of seven stripes until the abrupt end, Continued on to a whole wall, These are horrors I can never comprehend, It leaves me sore, From my one single day in Sobibor.

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[6] horus8 21-Jul-03/11:52 AM Reply
The difference between Jews and American Indians is the tribes don't fucking whine on a daily basis, and they are still piss broke and suffering. While the Jews are once again on the top, in control of everything, as always still fucking pretending like they got it bad. Perhaps you should do a piece on the Pygmies plight called "White dwarf".
[6] horus8 21-Jul-03/12:09 PM Reply
Well, one thing for sure, you sure know how to cater your pieces to the best list! Next, perhaps, do one on the struggles of the neanderthal before they were exterminated, or, how about the chinese in California? Sure, then, you could occupy every single slot on the top poemranker countdown along with the rest of the poet hacks. ten movies a year come out in the jewish controled movie industry telling this same story a million times better over and over again. Yet, do they, 'the jews' take the time to explore other races struggles? No, not in the least, because they only give a fuck about themselves. Oh, hey lets do another tired movie on world war two? what about the palestinians? What about the genocides in Africa or south America, sweat shops, child labor, but no, another fucking Jewish blee on jewish blow blee blah blue. Whatever. Jews only look after themselves, and I'm fucking sick of it, I'm not saying the nazis were right or that the Jews didn't suffer, but I can name thousands of shit (currentevents) that's just as important to be aware of get lost underneath the much more important plight of the Jews (since they own the media)... But alas I'm sure you can add it to your control of the board mr pig, but personally, I thought it was poorly written, and to an average kid into poetry, it's incomprehendible anyway. I hope it goes to #1. Good day.
[6] horus8 › horus8 21-Jul-03/12:20 PM Reply
1. entertainment industry jewish controled

2. gem and gold industry jewish controled

3. bank industry jewish

4. textiles jewish

5. land development abroad

explain to me how a people as a whole can monopolize the whole fucking planet, extinguish women and children themselves currently (the middle east), have more money than the cathoic church and still look for sympathy? Boring, that's how they pull off the shell trick! Yeah, let's dwell on the past so we can't m,ake night or day out of the present. Bullshit, fucking propaganda jewish bullshit.
[n/a] Mr Pig › horus8 21-Jul-03/12:57 PM Reply
I understand your point but this was one of most brutal, fascist and mass genocides the world has seen in a so called 'civilized' world. My life experience cannot be ubiquitous with every event that has ever taken place. I am aware every country has its secrets it would rather hide, the british empire was a brutal regime, so were the Americans in destroying the native indians, the serbians and kosovans, the treatment of allied POWS in concentration camps. I have seen a very interesting true film of a jew hating jews called 'The Believer' if you ever get chance watch it. However you cannot argue that jewish children and infants too young to understand religion or politics and megalomaniacs deserved too die? How as an American did you feel to the Arabs hollering in the streets celebrating the death of the tragic people killed in September 11th? Millions of Somalians die and received next to zero news coverage, yet September 11th dominted the world stage and journalistic events for months and months so I wonder how they feel. I am ashamed to be British sometimes, patriotism is a jaded religion for the common man, you and I are priveleged and owe our liberty to all fallen in whatever war big or small. I have nothing against Jews they have not wronged me (yet) but this poem is about the human condition, courage under unbearable suffering not about a top 20 spot on poemranker.

If you tell me what you find incomprehendible I will be glad to explain, this poem took the longest to write than any other I have ever written.

Incidentally poemrankers votes are not necessary but your comments will be appreciated.
[6] horus8 › Mr Pig 21-Jul-03/2:55 PM Reply
Well, for one it's missing a contrast. You might think the Jews died karmicly unjustified but Germany was going through a major depression after world war 1, where the German people were starving, dying, jobless, and watching their country be stolen from them by the Jews, their jobs, their land, their way of life. They were infiltrated by the holy land just like the palestinians are being now. That's why when hitler came to power people sided with him, Mr. Pig, because he had a point. Do you think people would just jump on board any posse or lynch squad unless there was a reason? So why don't you mention what the Jews were doing to the Germans to piss them off so much? Or do you even know? My friend if you are going to expose evil, do it right, do you think the devil was kicked out of heaven because he was entirely wrong and without a good argument? You're wrong. Don't shave evils face and put it in a tux with a devilish mustache pull with no back story. The Jews died horrifically and they should not of had to die like that, but you know what? they should have been a bit more sensitive to the peoples struggle in the country the were in. They crossed the picket line and took peoples jobs, they starved familys out and made the German men feel impudent in a time when most German men were dead from the first war. It's was a horrible tome and the Jews migrated in by the millions and made a serious situation much worse, but of course history books barely mention that. Point being Mr. Pig the German people struggled too we are after all discussing revenge, stupid one sided pent up frustrated revenge. That's when women and children suffer the most for the down right impudencce of men. A man with no job, has no penis and he will lash out at those that took his job and his penis it's very simple mr. pig, very simple.
[n/a] Mr Pig › horus8 21-Jul-03/4:09 PM Reply
I know my history, Crystal night, Long of the long knives, but more importantly I know the fundamental differences ofwrong and right and no one in these horror camps deserved the degradation. Do you really think the Nazis sought personally out the avaricious Jews who were decimating their economy? do you think that Hitlers plan to exterminate EVERY jewish, man woman and child and unborn would give the Aryan race the God given right to take over the world. I cannot believe what you are saying ! If Hitler were alive today there would be no Jews, My mother would have been a prostitute and the economy would be dictated by a Psychopath, Our children would know no freedom, no star spangled banner, no right to vote, no right to speak out which we tonight have had the freedom to do and diplomatically disagree. I have to say that the very monopoly the Jews had in the depression era America and England have today, but do we go and kill everyone just to eradicate a race we dont like? Yes some extremists do but not on the same scale as Hitler. We are too clever for the propaganda machine, I have nothing but contempt for Hitler who I must state was real and the Devil is the closest living proof you have to Hitler.

Close your eyes for one moment and imagine a black child screaming for his father, he has seen his family shot, the child knows nothing of war, religion, politics, history, then the child is gassed and dumped in a mass grave left for the flies, ask yourself what he died for?

Now open your eyes and just for one second imagine that the child is someones you care about.

Fuck the German people, if we tarred them with the same brush that you tar the Jews with they would have died straight after the war. I am no Jew, No christian, moslem or pagan but I am someone who knows right from wrong.

And Horus, you mentioned in your other comment that younger people would not understand my poem, well can you explain how they would understand a poem about the terrible plight the jews caused the Germans? No one cares because in contrast its a flea rather than a fly in shit.

The poem was merely written with good intention and I have been to Sobibor, I suggest everyone goes there, or a trench from WW1 I owe my life to those who gave me the right to enjoy the life I live today.

I do not owe thanks for that to any German.
[6] horus8 › Mr Pig 21-Jul-03/5:06 PM Reply
I am not crystal night, just

Jeremi B. Handrinos (notice the dot because there are imposters
Baba
Bachus
and shardik.

Also the rich jews left the country long before. Your people are so fucking greedy, they even long knived themselves.

The actual Aryan race were a steppe people from 5,000 years ago. Hitler stole the title and concept from them and the Atlantaens from 13,000 years ago. Also no one goes after someone that vehemently without a huge deep rooted hatred.
Hitler isn't alive though, because that could never have happened, good defeats evil when the stake of natural balancce is at hand. Also you are just sensitive because you're a jew, get over it, do you think I walk around whining about my hertige rights to whine? Hardly? I am a prostitute, so what, I get over it on a daily basis. I am constintly stereotyped and criticized why? That's what people do when there's not work to do. Idle minds breed hate. Your hatred for them is no different then theirs for you therefore the whole thing is comical.

America and English through the money and guidance of the Jews, you mean, because in this country sweety, the Jews keep those bible belted christians bible belted and bush rolling in the stupid cash, soft money contributions. Also the Devil and Hitler? Had nothing in common by a long shot. lol. Really, like what? I must have forgot the devil man war of 94? please, don't make my brain, make your brain explode. the devil is a mythological representation of the uknown and instinctually uncontrolable. Where as hitler was an actual person that lived this century. Also Stalin was worse and killed more people, and Napolean killed more than both of them almost put together. They must be Satan and Lucifers cousins to the devil. And what of the witch hunts, and what of the inquisition aye, Was the pope the devil then?
[6] horus8 › Mr Pig 21-Jul-03/3:08 PM Reply
And fuck september eleventh too. We had that coming, and I personally thought it was a genius attack as far as strategy goes and I despise Muslims and Jews and especially Texans.
[n/a] Mr Pig › horus8 21-Jul-03/4:17 PM Reply
I am curious, I am understand you are Greek in Origin and from some of the poetry you have written it seems to me you are proud of this.

Was it not the Nazis that killed 1000s of Greeks in WW2? Imagine the Thracian mountains you wrote about covered in swatstikahs.

You do realize that Hitler only believed the Aryan race was pure? he considered EVERY other race impure which makes us in Hitlers eyes dead.

And I am off to Cephalonia in October and its a beautiful place. Now H8 I love you to bits but I'm taking a raincheck on this one we'll have to agree to disagree.

Phew I'm out of juice.
[6] horus8 › Mr Pig 21-Jul-03/4:36 PM Reply
Yes I am proud of my Origins from Greece, South America, Scotland, but I am mostly German From the Ludeman's and the Laasch's. My father was greek and german, scottish and my mother southamerican indian and German, but beyond all of that I am a human being that beliefs in children not name dropping, and as long as we seperate by tragedy or love, or gender, sexual preference, we are all doomed. The Jews must give back and get off their high horse, or they will once again as with the egyptians, the phillistines, the babalonians, the crusades, the nazis, they will again come into question, and they will again allow their greed to destroy their children, and it's already in full swing. We are building up for a major land and religious war very soon. Whether you are vacationing or not.
[6] horus8 21-Jul-03/12:23 PM Reply
Oh yeah, and let's not forget the nepotism? God forbid they should give the job to the more qualified recipient instead of their mentally challenged nephew.
[n/a] DurtKL 21-Jul-03/3:38 PM Reply
seriously, how many
schindler's lists and pianos do we need?
maybe until every director gets an oscar

[6] horus8 › DurtKL 21-Jul-03/4:00 PM Reply
A very excellent point, because that's exactly how it works, seriously, it's a shoe in, make a jew plight movie with a decent cast and director tada oscar. not that I didn't love both movies, or many others on the subject, I did. I thought the scene in schindler's list when ralph heines get's done fucking that whore and starts taking aim with his rifle after that long gorgeous piss was inspirational, and when Adrien Brody is trying to open that can of pickles in the piano, riveting.

but I am An American humanist theologian hybrid, and I can assure you as long as people feel the way they do about land, money, and god, it will never end, the persecutions will just become more inventive and torturous on a larger level. I know more Indians died than Jews when America stole it from them. More tsutsi, more in hindus and muslims collectively in India during their war, but is it a question of who lost more quicker? Apparently to them but not me, it's mighty pointless and ridiculous to even think in those terms it shows a lack of faith in the ability for people to look ahead and not behind. That's why were doomed to repeat the past, because we walk forward looking backwards running into the same shit over and over.

Woman and children and music and literature and nature and animals should be cherished at all costs and never sacraficed under any circumstance not even the possibilty of inner or outer planetary travel. We as a people of the same planet should be working together looking toward the skys, our oceans, our land to repair it and conserve it not refine it and strip it and control and steal it, because if thats the case, when we do start traveling in space and under seas, we'll just do the same thing out there to other planets and aliens and life forms. WE as a people need a mental, physical and spiritual overhaul soon, and bad. Or we are going to kill everything.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › horus8 22-Jul-03/7:51 PM Reply
i wish you write a book about this.. addiction to words is my disease, your writing makes me a crack whore needing a fix.
[6] horus8 › DreamerSupreme 22-Jul-03/7:58 PM Reply
Thank you, what a lovely thing to say.
[n/a] Mr Pig › DurtKL 21-Jul-03/4:24 PM Reply
I agree Durt that Schindlers list, The Uprising, And the pianist have raised the issue as far as a mainstream audience would accept it but considering the scale of murder I would say a crappy god sprayed statue is deserved for the way it was portrayed. I mean Schindlers list was a 3 hour film and as most people would know Paramount Pictures and Universal etc would take a lot of convincing to release a 3 hour film (profit comes to mind) BUT if they mentioned the Jews pissing the Germans off it would be a 6 hour film and widely regarded as missing the key point.

Can you imagine JAmes Cameron directing Schindlers list?

Uuurgh the thought scares me.
[8] richa 21-Jul-03/4:02 PM Reply
varied use of language as ever, and the allusions to religeous persecution vis a vis the cutting of hair is succinctly put. So much so the nazi and jew bits are almost not needed
[6] horus8 21-Jul-03/5:08 PM Reply
Your understanding of your own history as a Jew Mr. Pig is vague, tainted in fear and sensitivity and onesidedly weak and colorless. All people have a right to live, not just the jews. Your comment above makes you no better than hitler, just another uninformed fanatic and personally a waste of my knowledge and my time. Why don't you go read up on your history a little bit more then get back with me, because, it's worse than your haikus. Your jewish filter, is doing what most people hate jews for, it's taking 'them' (anyone who's not jewish) out of the equation and centering on you and your people. There were more than just jews in those camps. there were italians, greeks, poles, hungarians, russians, gypsys, anyone that didn't fit the nazi's bill... So tell me pig? What color were their stars? Check Mate, mate. Enjoy your trip, you deserve it, god knows your poor people have just gotten a bum deal, I'm sure everyone owes you and yours' a never ending appology. After wwII and every German boy between the ages of ten and twenty was dead, and the jews were dead and the japs were fucking NUKED! NUKED! god and they whine about that alot huh? do you think it was the German people's fault? What the fuck is wrong with you? Are you that fucking Jewish? You make me sick man, just disgusting, you didn't learn a fucking thing from either side.
[n/a] Mr Pig › horus8 22-Jul-03/12:59 AM Reply
You seem to think you know everything and you do not.

I am not a jew. (check mate)
Are you God? did you create me? how the hell do you know what fucking race I am. Its clearly obvious to me after reading your drivel that if you dont know something you simply invent it to massage your intellectual ego. I am nothing like Hitler you are the one labelling wrongly people and resorting to futile playground name calling. As for my Haiku you have actually said gave me positive remarks so saying they are poor now just shows you to be immature, and a jerk. I guess your Poem 'Nigger hole' is accessible to the audience you feel I am alienating? we all do god, bad, exceptional poems from time to time I am no paragon but I do know when someone is taking something way to far like you are. You could do with thinking about what you say before you let rip horus.

Maybe you are a jew because I say you are ! you see its childish to label people isn't it?

Finally this bloody poem was written about the plight of the holocaust not an opportunity for you to advertize your conceited opinions of the poor wronger German common men who 'rightfully' avenged the greedy and i bet you think big nosed jews by torturing them to death and persecuting them.

The Final Solution Horus, you were not born then, neither was I and their are some things we will never know but the facts remain that Hitler and the Aryan race were scumbags so if you feel so strongly why not shave your hair, iron those blue collars and head for your nearest jewish suburb and chant your pathetic defence of history.

I have seen a side of you which truly disappoints and saddens me. All you had too say was 'your poem was bad i never liked it and a basic reason why'

Who do you think you are ?

[n/a] Christof 22-Jul-03/4:49 AM Reply
I have some sympathy with Horus's point. It seems that the struggle in the Middle East at the moment is the result of the Jewish people having single-mindedly failed to learn from their own history of the last 50-60 years. Yes the Holocaust was an absolutely foul, vile, depraved event in history - and let's not imagine that the Germans were alone in their views, there were plenty of proto-Nazis in Britain, France, Italy, Spain (and the US - the KKK) who also had blood on their hands. However, I think the point of history is not to labour one event, one people's history, for the purpose of eliciting merely pity or horror (or, for that matter, Academy Awards). The point is to learn from it, to move on, to try to make the world progress in some way. Both Horus and Mr Pig have talked with some pride of their backgrounds, have distinguished different strains of identity, different ethnic groups. Everybody needs to know where they come from, but an obsessive attention to ethnic detail, to the rights and wrongs of past members of particular groups generations ago, is where all the trouble starts. What does it matter if your great-great-grandfather was a black Scotsman from Wales? It matters because it affects how you live now, how you understand the world; it should not be used as some kind of badge of honour. I think a person deserves special treatment not because of who their parents were, but because of what they do with their lives. Racial division is the biggest problem the human race faces, because it threatens to destroy us.

A small historical fact to add to the German/Jew argument - a lot of right-wing aggression towards the Jews was centred around a book called 'The Protocols of the Zionist Elders', which purported to have been produced by rabbis and leading Jews and which spoke of a conspiracy to take over the world. It was a forgery produced by European anti-Semites in the late 19th century. I don't think Hitler's rise to power is quite so easily explicable by the ambitions of the Jews. Anti-Semitism has a far longer and ignobler history than that, and you have to remember that Germany had been shafted in the Treay of Versailles by the very unJewish (and also fairly anti-Semitic in places) British, US and French governments.
[6] horus8 › Christof 22-Jul-03/8:24 PM Reply
All very informative, true and lovely points.
[9] INTRANSIT 22-Jul-03/5:43 AM Reply
Nice discussion, gentlemen. Wish I had time to read it all. when I get home. Amazing how much impact one day, minute , hour, moment, second, can have.
[6] horus8 22-Jul-03/2:37 PM Reply
3) I live in A Jewish neighborhood, i am my next door neighbors shabbas goy, I am not jewish, but all of my dearest friend are, and my mentor is David Weismen. My agent Robert Abrahms (jew) my manager didi binder (jew), but was that my point? That I have something against Jews? I don't, but I'm not afraid to tell them what I think either, it doesn't mean I'm a nazi. I believe both sides were wrong, and also that America and some others put these balls in motion with the treaty of Versailles. Aryans are not racists, their name was stolen and used inappropriately, once again they were a peaceful steppe people 5,000 years ago, but when you take a moron and give him an occult book he can't understand? Weird shit can happen. My pathetic defense of History is not pathetic, or a defense, I just enjoy pushing stereotypes until they break. I am taoist by heart and feel that hating any team that your favourite team is playing? Is an unevolving 360 degree trap. We should not blame the German people, or Hitler, or Nazis. We should blame our own inability to maintain a grasp on reality when we win the lottery, or are informed we are dying. But some can't maintain, they snap, go out and kill their coworkers. Or (in the case of winning) spend the money on ridiculous shit until broke or dead for a life of what ifs. It's your classic example of a child seeing how far they can push a parent until no. Hitler was a psychotic just begging for attention and to be told no. If it wasn't the Jews it would have been someone else. When a psychopath is surrounded by enablers, money, fear, and people waiting on every word they utter. They become a time bomb, and when they get that first taste of superstar applause? Look out!

4) I am not conceited, I'm just more aware than your normal Joe, and I wouldn't torture anything, being a survivor of torture myself. To become that would be my worst nightmare.
i am debating the fact that your poem doesn't include anyone else but the Jews and the Nazis black and white, if you would of had an italian girl singing to cheer them up before dying, or a gypsy still hustling incarcerated it would have been contrasted and brought humor and hope to an impossible situation, and show your audience that you're not just writing this because everyone will give it tens out of guilt.
[6] horus8 22-Jul-03/2:41 PM Reply
5) "Maybe you are a jew because I say you are ! you see its childish to label people isn't it?" What? If a person's jewish and proud of it, and I say "hey there goes a jew" am i labeling them? Hardly, I think that's called stating the obvious. I am not a nazi or a Jew, I do write from their perspectives occasionally to inform people that. A Jew thinks anyone that is not Jewish is an infidel, lesser than, not the choosen people. A Nazi, is just a nihilist in uniform with an agenda that they think is worth dying for, if not worth killing people for, and they also think that they are 'special' and chosen. Now tell me, if that aint a match made in heaven, what is? I find it a waste of time all together to join any group that revolves around seperatism

6)Since you're not a Jew, you are doing just what I do, imagining, except how can you be so good at describing your blooding and such, but toss it on this one? My poem niggerhole has nothing to do with the Black race. Nor does the word nigger look it up. That poem was about Humanists going off (satanists) because I think it's funny what people will buy into to belong. Your comment above is very Hitlerish, by the way, though you are not, because it's psychotic and all over the place. i never said your haikus were not good they're just always syllablicly off, and since your one of the best list favourites. i was wondering if you were going to get good at counting eventually.

Communicating about a subject like this is healthy, not taking things too far. And I think about everything I say, especially when 30 million souls died for this horseshit. Am I a god? Yes, we are all the image of god, and capable of infinitely more than finger pointing and slavery or racism or murder.
[6] horus8 22-Jul-03/2:42 PM Reply
7) I do not know everything, but all people are born with the subconscious ability to feel what's right or wrong. Besides knowing everything would suck because i'm already over informed, and my intuition is so keen that I guess right 90% of the time,
it ruins movies, relationships and boardgames, but all that comes back to comprehension levels, memory recapitulation, and reading while grounded or incarcerated. Oh, and genetics ZEIG HEIL! lol.
[6] horus8 22-Jul-03/2:45 PM Reply
You would be a crappy lawyer, relax. Let's answer some of your observations shall we.

1) I think I am Horus8, a magic name I chose for special reasons some might unriddle when I'm dead.

2) I did not think your poem was bad. You are a good writer it would be hard for you to write something bad. I said that to the normal poet it would be confusing because of the language, place, and terms you used both metaphorically and up front. Because, it's a muddy surface. You follow what all of our text books taught us perfectly and there's nothing new or different about your observations, and poets are experts at putting a newlight or twist on an old dance, but you didn't. i'm surprised there wasn't a lampshade, or a delousing, or a train car with eyes and hands. Your approach and mood is also very rigid and bias. Good writers use research and undiscovered angles and data to their advantage, you didn't. Sometimes the best way to define pain and suffering immeasurable. Is to contrast it like in that movie "Life is beautiful" or my favourite Lina Wertmuller's "Seven Beautys" where this Italian ladys man gets thrown in a concentration camp, and what ensues is just a perfect example of what my point to you is.
[n/a] Mr Pig › horus8 22-Jul-03/2:50 PM Reply
Horus before we both get bags under our eyes and go mental :

I accept why you felt incensed we are both passionate souls and when things get heated our emotions boil over. This powm was only based on the events of the holocaust nothing more, nothing less but I have learned that this is a subject NO ONE can touch on without courting a mixed response. I believe we grow up and are taught in a dubious curriculum of politically selected history (I'm not that gullible that the german race believed in hitlers causes) But I have learned (like you) to search for the darker sides of humanity and shine a light on it. This was a light that did not reach you and I do not believe in the succinct nature of a poem one could capture the whole story. That is why I chose a chapter in history and to be honest horus reflecting on our exchange I am pleased we have disagreed and oyu have enlightened anyone who will read this whoi may not have known of why the nazis persecuted the Jews.

I think due to our passionate natures we are bound to wind each other up, you wrote a poem about the pig and jew and I called you a hypocrite.

However you asked me once I you could trust me, and I KNOW I can trust you as you know things about me no one on p/r knows and that was my choice because I respect you, your a ballsy guy who lives his dreams something I used to do and do no longer.

Therfore to conclude I wish to offer no hard feelings and to thank you and the rest of the commentors for such a knackering but apt discussion.

Warm regards

Mr Pig.

(let their be love again)
[6] horus8 › Mr Pig 22-Jul-03/4:40 PM Reply
I am your friend never forget that. What we did here was communicate our beliefs and that's a damn healthy thing.
[6] horus8 › Mr Pig 22-Jul-03/8:16 PM Reply
i thought my poem a pig and jew on island was hilarious did you read that? Good god,I put some shit in there that had me shaking my head while writing it. It's brilliant, read it again. I even take a cheapshot on the dark one in it. Debating good... Agreeing bad... by the way, I hope you'er not tired, because I was writing left handed while debating you. My right hand is teaching my son had to read. i'm so happy, i got him into one of the best K-5 schools in Southern California. 800.00 a month but it's worth it. And he's only three going on four. I'm so very proud of him, and glad had the time to home school him for this last year. He's a beautiful wiz. My boy, my baby boy's going to school. I'm so excited.
[n/a] god'swife 22-Jul-03/3:29 PM Reply
Mr. Pig, Mr. Pig, you overwhelm
Like a waltz with too much structure, you send me
spinning round the room.

Less is sometimes more.
But still I love you so
I hate to upset this unique cart.
[n/a] god'swife 22-Jul-03/3:35 PM Reply
Listen,
If any mother's child dies
It does not matter how.
Wicked is wicked anyway you slice it. Let us say my boy
Yes my sweet boy Cancer maybe?
Or prejudice?