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Yellow Star (Free verse) by Mr Pig

Yellow stars in a pit of faces, Staring transfixed from their tomb, At their possessions neatly stacked by ‘perfect mortals’ Suitcases aligned outside the shower room, Emblazoned in names or chalk epitaphs, That stands beside a leather mountain of heels. The drone of a single shaver, Removing the perfect hair, That will be used for textiles to seam more yellow stars, The sick irony of death bearing death, And the whooping cough of a typhoid stricken child, Walking with her mother mild, To the room of no return. In the shower room I sit half a century on, Thinking of the nameless gone, In this room I recall the Mothers, Who would try to help their babies breathe By making them suckle on desperate nipples, Both dying in the shape that they lived in the womb, Where screams turned to smoke that would bellow for hours, I break down in the shower room. I remain haunted by the corrugated corridors, The squeak and lingering echo of recycled boots on shiny floors, Where laughing Nazis would walk to block 11, To purify Jews by liquid suffocation, I see a name carved in to granite, Next to rows of seven stripes until the abrupt end, Continued on to a whole wall, These are horrors I can never comprehend, It leaves me sore, From my one single day in Sobibor.

horus8 21-Jul-03/4:00 PM
A very excellent point, because that's exactly how it works, seriously, it's a shoe in, make a jew plight movie with a decent cast and director tada oscar. not that I didn't love both movies, or many others on the subject, I did. I thought the scene in schindler's list when ralph heines get's done fucking that whore and starts taking aim with his rifle after that long gorgeous piss was inspirational, and when Adrien Brody is trying to open that can of pickles in the piano, riveting.

but I am An American humanist theologian hybrid, and I can assure you as long as people feel the way they do about land, money, and god, it will never end, the persecutions will just become more inventive and torturous on a larger level. I know more Indians died than Jews when America stole it from them. More tsutsi, more in hindus and muslims collectively in India during their war, but is it a question of who lost more quicker? Apparently to them but not me, it's mighty pointless and ridiculous to even think in those terms it shows a lack of faith in the ability for people to look ahead and not behind. That's why were doomed to repeat the past, because we walk forward looking backwards running into the same shit over and over.

Woman and children and music and literature and nature and animals should be cherished at all costs and never sacraficed under any circumstance not even the possibilty of inner or outer planetary travel. We as a people of the same planet should be working together looking toward the skys, our oceans, our land to repair it and conserve it not refine it and strip it and control and steal it, because if thats the case, when we do start traveling in space and under seas, we'll just do the same thing out there to other planets and aliens and life forms. WE as a people need a mental, physical and spiritual overhaul soon, and bad. Or we are going to kill everything.




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