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In the Vicinity of Dreams (Free verse) by Blue Magpie
I am in the vicinity of dreams here
beside this lake.
Fantasies of a life that is simply lived,
not one that is worried about,
flow in the quiet air above the tepid,
slowly-moving waters.
Gently they waft into my eyes,
allowing me to see,
serenity.
Peacefulness is here
amongst the reeds,
drifting across the water lilies
draped over the shallows like old paint
cracked and pealing into the sun-loved air.
Here where Ardeola stands
like the finger of some aquatic God
momentarily pointing the way to life.
to freedom, to peace
for my fact and technology blinded mind,
while Podiceps cristata looks beneath the weeds
for what she needs, and nothing more.
Live they cry,
these quite echoes of my sight.
Be and be blessed in the riches that are here,
like the frogs and the dragonflies,
real and alive
for all their lives.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3
Weighted score: 6.15
Overall Rank: 1066
Posted: July 13, 2003 12:25 AM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2003 12:25 AM PDT
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A complete poem gentle 'the vicinity of dreams' is kind of modern too