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Yellow Star (Free verse) by Mr Pig

Yellow stars in a pit of faces, Staring transfixed from their tomb, At their possessions neatly stacked by ‘perfect mortals’ Suitcases aligned outside the shower room, Emblazoned in names or chalk epitaphs, That stands beside a leather mountain of heels. The drone of a single shaver, Removing the perfect hair, That will be used for textiles to seam more yellow stars, The sick irony of death bearing death, And the whooping cough of a typhoid stricken child, Walking with her mother mild, To the room of no return. In the shower room I sit half a century on, Thinking of the nameless gone, In this room I recall the Mothers, Who would try to help their babies breathe By making them suckle on desperate nipples, Both dying in the shape that they lived in the womb, Where screams turned to smoke that would bellow for hours, I break down in the shower room. I remain haunted by the corrugated corridors, The squeak and lingering echo of recycled boots on shiny floors, Where laughing Nazis would walk to block 11, To purify Jews by liquid suffocation, I see a name carved in to granite, Next to rows of seven stripes until the abrupt end, Continued on to a whole wall, These are horrors I can never comprehend, It leaves me sore, From my one single day in Sobibor.

Mr Pig 21-Jul-03/4:09 PM
I know my history, Crystal night, Long of the long knives, but more importantly I know the fundamental differences ofwrong and right and no one in these horror camps deserved the degradation. Do you really think the Nazis sought personally out the avaricious Jews who were decimating their economy? do you think that Hitlers plan to exterminate EVERY jewish, man woman and child and unborn would give the Aryan race the God given right to take over the world. I cannot believe what you are saying ! If Hitler were alive today there would be no Jews, My mother would have been a prostitute and the economy would be dictated by a Psychopath, Our children would know no freedom, no star spangled banner, no right to vote, no right to speak out which we tonight have had the freedom to do and diplomatically disagree. I have to say that the very monopoly the Jews had in the depression era America and England have today, but do we go and kill everyone just to eradicate a race we dont like? Yes some extremists do but not on the same scale as Hitler. We are too clever for the propaganda machine, I have nothing but contempt for Hitler who I must state was real and the Devil is the closest living proof you have to Hitler.

Close your eyes for one moment and imagine a black child screaming for his father, he has seen his family shot, the child knows nothing of war, religion, politics, history, then the child is gassed and dumped in a mass grave left for the flies, ask yourself what he died for?

Now open your eyes and just for one second imagine that the child is someones you care about.

Fuck the German people, if we tarred them with the same brush that you tar the Jews with they would have died straight after the war. I am no Jew, No christian, moslem or pagan but I am someone who knows right from wrong.

And Horus, you mentioned in your other comment that younger people would not understand my poem, well can you explain how they would understand a poem about the terrible plight the jews caused the Germans? No one cares because in contrast its a flea rather than a fly in shit.

The poem was merely written with good intention and I have been to Sobibor, I suggest everyone goes there, or a trench from WW1 I owe my life to those who gave me the right to enjoy the life I live today.

I do not owe thanks for that to any German.




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