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Yellow Star (Free verse) by Mr Pig

Yellow stars in a pit of faces, Staring transfixed from their tomb, At their possessions neatly stacked by ‘perfect mortals’ Suitcases aligned outside the shower room, Emblazoned in names or chalk epitaphs, That stands beside a leather mountain of heels. The drone of a single shaver, Removing the perfect hair, That will be used for textiles to seam more yellow stars, The sick irony of death bearing death, And the whooping cough of a typhoid stricken child, Walking with her mother mild, To the room of no return. In the shower room I sit half a century on, Thinking of the nameless gone, In this room I recall the Mothers, Who would try to help their babies breathe By making them suckle on desperate nipples, Both dying in the shape that they lived in the womb, Where screams turned to smoke that would bellow for hours, I break down in the shower room. I remain haunted by the corrugated corridors, The squeak and lingering echo of recycled boots on shiny floors, Where laughing Nazis would walk to block 11, To purify Jews by liquid suffocation, I see a name carved in to granite, Next to rows of seven stripes until the abrupt end, Continued on to a whole wall, These are horrors I can never comprehend, It leaves me sore, From my one single day in Sobibor.

Mr Pig 21-Jul-03/4:17 PM
I am curious, I am understand you are Greek in Origin and from some of the poetry you have written it seems to me you are proud of this.

Was it not the Nazis that killed 1000s of Greeks in WW2? Imagine the Thracian mountains you wrote about covered in swatstikahs.

You do realize that Hitler only believed the Aryan race was pure? he considered EVERY other race impure which makes us in Hitlers eyes dead.

And I am off to Cephalonia in October and its a beautiful place. Now H8 I love you to bits but I'm taking a raincheck on this one we'll have to agree to disagree.

Phew I'm out of juice.




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