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Yellow Star (Free verse) by Mr Pig

Yellow stars in a pit of faces, Staring transfixed from their tomb, At their possessions neatly stacked by ‘perfect mortals’ Suitcases aligned outside the shower room, Emblazoned in names or chalk epitaphs, That stands beside a leather mountain of heels. The drone of a single shaver, Removing the perfect hair, That will be used for textiles to seam more yellow stars, The sick irony of death bearing death, And the whooping cough of a typhoid stricken child, Walking with her mother mild, To the room of no return. In the shower room I sit half a century on, Thinking of the nameless gone, In this room I recall the Mothers, Who would try to help their babies breathe By making them suckle on desperate nipples, Both dying in the shape that they lived in the womb, Where screams turned to smoke that would bellow for hours, I break down in the shower room. I remain haunted by the corrugated corridors, The squeak and lingering echo of recycled boots on shiny floors, Where laughing Nazis would walk to block 11, To purify Jews by liquid suffocation, I see a name carved in to granite, Next to rows of seven stripes until the abrupt end, Continued on to a whole wall, These are horrors I can never comprehend, It leaves me sore, From my one single day in Sobibor.

horus8 21-Jul-03/5:08 PM
Your understanding of your own history as a Jew Mr. Pig is vague, tainted in fear and sensitivity and onesidedly weak and colorless. All people have a right to live, not just the jews. Your comment above makes you no better than hitler, just another uninformed fanatic and personally a waste of my knowledge and my time. Why don't you go read up on your history a little bit more then get back with me, because, it's worse than your haikus. Your jewish filter, is doing what most people hate jews for, it's taking 'them' (anyone who's not jewish) out of the equation and centering on you and your people. There were more than just jews in those camps. there were italians, greeks, poles, hungarians, russians, gypsys, anyone that didn't fit the nazi's bill... So tell me pig? What color were their stars? Check Mate, mate. Enjoy your trip, you deserve it, god knows your poor people have just gotten a bum deal, I'm sure everyone owes you and yours' a never ending appology. After wwII and every German boy between the ages of ten and twenty was dead, and the jews were dead and the japs were fucking NUKED! NUKED! god and they whine about that alot huh? do you think it was the German people's fault? What the fuck is wrong with you? Are you that fucking Jewish? You make me sick man, just disgusting, you didn't learn a fucking thing from either side.




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