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Free verse № 53441

The irony of the dark continent

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Jun 2003 · 5 comments

I want to know the names of all whose cries float through the burglar bars, the open windows after sundown, here. Missing the noises of home, their unfamiliar voices weave a night-song in a rhythm different than my own; whoever arranged this nocturnal calling-out knows nothing of crickets mixed with raccoon chatter, or the over-full throats of bullfrogs breaking the heat, boastfully beneath a July moon. There—something like a cuckoo laid down over a rustling too big for an opossum, and silence, in all the wrong places. Slow-dancing is out of the question. This sallow night on a hill above a city I do not love holds me back, locks me out, even as I am locked in. Even from the forgiving darkness, even from the night.

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5 comments

[9] Bachus 19-Jun-03/1:25 PM Reply
Sorry to hear that.
[n/a] zzinnia66 › Bachus 19-Jun-03/1:47 PM Reply
sad to feel it.
[8] INTRANSIT 19-Jun-03/5:17 PM Reply
Anchor down! You've weathered worse!
This new home seeks nature terse.
For thither come, has their nurse,
good will come, from you, disperse.
[n/a] Jeremi 19-Jun-03/7:36 PM Reply
VIOLENCE AGAINST WOMEN LOL
[8] OneFingerAnswer 20-Jun-03/1:53 AM Reply
No profound comment. Just an 8. Look at it though. Like a heart with no sharp corner, it softly says "I love you."