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The irony of the dark continent (Free verse) by zzinnia66
I want to know the names of all whose cries float through the burglar bars, the open windows after sundown, here. Missing the noises of home, their unfamiliar voices weave a night-song in a rhythm different than my own; whoever arranged this nocturnal calling-out knows nothing of crickets mixed with raccoon chatter, or the over-full throats of bullfrogs breaking the heat, boastfully beneath a July moon. There—something like a cuckoo laid down over a rustling too big for an opossum, and silence, in all the wrong places. Slow-dancing is out of the question. This sallow night on a hill above a city I do not love holds me back, locks me out, even as I am locked in. Even from the forgiving darkness, even from the night.

Down the ladder: Fides

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4026
Posted: June 19, 2003 12:41 PM PDT; Last modified: June 19, 2003 12:41 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-Jun-03/1:25 PM | Reply
Sorry to hear that.
[n/a] zzinnia66 @ 196.30.245.149 > Bachus | 19-Jun-03/1:47 PM | Reply
sad to feel it.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46 | 19-Jun-03/5:17 PM | Reply
Anchor down! You've weathered worse!
This new home seeks nature terse.
For thither come, has their nurse,
good will come, from you, disperse.
[n/a] Jeremi @ 208.59.182.112 | 19-Jun-03/7:36 PM | Reply
VIOLENCE AGAINST WOMEN LOL
[8] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 | 20-Jun-03/1:53 AM | Reply
No profound comment. Just an 8. Look at it though. Like a heart with no sharp corner, it softly says "I love you."
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