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Kakistocracy (Haiku) by <{Baba^Yaga}> Panoramica
views of enslaved cattle
Citizens Cained
Up the ladder:
spring
Down the ladder:
Skellington Bakery
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.1
Posted: July 25, 2003 1:51 PM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2003 1:51 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.05 Overall Rank: 1206 Comments:
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EAger to Offend @ 204.225.154.253
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25-Jul-03/1:57 PM
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This is hot shit!
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
> EAger to Offend
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25-Jul-03/2:18 PM
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Do you really think so! urp.
what is kakistocracy
kakistocracy
n. - government by the worst citizens
like it or not, it likes to be not. because it's not like it's not or, it depends on what your definition of the word "is " is. wtf? lol!!!!!
"Panoramica" and "views of enslaved cattle" work well together, as do "Kakistocracy" and "Citizens Cained". I'm not sure if I'm getting the best complete picture, but the whole reminds me of Fast Food Nation.
I feel it's close, but could be arranged somehow better or strengthened too. We shall see on a later edit no doubt. Thanks kindly in the meantime.
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