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Kakistocracy (Haiku) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

Panoramica views of enslaved cattle Citizens Cained

Bachus 26-Jul-03/8:14 PM
I feel it's close, but could be arranged somehow better or strengthened too. We shall see on a later edit no doubt. Thanks kindly in the meantime.




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