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Beauty within (Free verse) by geewhiz1962
Piercing blue eyes, pearlie white teeth.
God how I wonder, what lies beneath?
Dressed to a tee, always in fashion.
The wondrous looks, they tickle my passion.
The upright posture, the walk of a queen.
Let me look closer, what does it mean?
Is the heart lovely? Is there beauty within?.
The package looks great, where do I begin?
Is she well rounded? She looks so great.
Should I say hi or should I hesitate?
I know a gal, whom I admire most.
Her looks are fine, she does not boast.
Beauty she has, it comes from within.
Trading that for a trophy, would be such a sin.
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Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11235
Posted: July 29, 2003 1:37 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2003 1:37 PM PDT
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