poemranker ::an exit into limbo by libby_28

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Free verse № 57937

an exit into limbo

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Jul 2003 · 2 comments

Pick up the pieces of your memory, A special time invested for youth. Thoughts of a time in which you were happy Gone now as you look out the window The worst gift given to you in thought, That is the feeling of being alone. A life changed from another’s ideas, A slow power struggle, Time, your bastard enemy. Draw your strength from nothing. Cry at night to the stars to ease your pain, Analyze your life down to the end. It is not sadness you feel, but fear. Wait around in a world of limbo, Take the other road to change.

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 29-Jul-03/12:01 AM Reply
Not to shabby.
[0] nentwined 19-Apr-04/10:36 PM Reply
This is just really bad.