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After seven days in the sun (Villanelle) by <~>
Nathalie, riding, found the boy, dead;
She had not known he was missing.
The coyote she startled ran on ahead
Letting the smell steer his tread.
She'd circled around to look for the thing--
When Nathalie, riding, found the boy, dead,
Face down in the sand. A feeling of dread
at seeing his corpse there, bloating,
A coyote, startled, but waiting, ahead--
A rare feast before it was spread.
It circled around, a coward, a king
When Nathalie, riding, found the boy, dead.
He'd used a rope; he'd severed the thread
Of breath in his self-made swing.
The coyote, startled, had run on ahead.
The black rope was tight, and had stopped his breath
As he swung from that fatal string.
And Nathalie, riding, found the boy, dead;
The coyote she startled ran on ahead.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.785714
Weighted score: 7.0365205
Overall Rank: 40
Posted: July 28, 2003 9:03 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2003 9:03 PM PDT
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