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Haiku № 55365

Priceless Moment

by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Jul 2003 · 10 comments

Counter culture on a bartop Three Private Eyes and Two Undercover Cops Busted, 5 years, Trafficing Stopped

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10 comments

[5] Jeremi B. Handrinos 6-Jul-03/10:17 PM Reply
When you fuck up a haiku, they roll out the red carpet. Great Christ in Saucer, abandon ship, he's never seeen an abacus.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › Jeremi B. Handrinos 6-Jul-03/10:31 PM Reply
I'd have paid just about anything to have seen the look on your face at the very moment you read this but your comment gives me a nice hint. LOL it is over by a few syllables but still, 5 words -7 words -5.
[5] Jeremi B. Handrinos › thepinkbunnyofdoom 7-Jul-03/2:02 AM Reply
17 syllables, words don't matter.
[10] King Abdullah II 7-Jul-03/12:46 AM Reply
JASON I THINK I LOVE YOU
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › King Abdullah II 8-Jul-03/12:42 PM Reply
Awe... Your such a sweetie pie.
[8] richa 7-Jul-03/2:26 PM Reply
a comment nice and succinct is the essence of poetry for me. This is not a haiku but never mind
[n/a] JoyLuck 7-Jul-03/6:34 PM Reply
even though it's not a haiku
interesting
fuck the po po
i just wanna smoke my ganja in peace.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › JoyLuck 8-Jul-03/12:46 PM Reply
Yeah, but hey! Its legal in canada(at least thats what I heard anyway.) If only the Bush would do something useful and make it legal... Til then its Tokin in the basement, for me.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer 7-Jul-03/7:13 PM Reply
Haiku.. ah, i never really had much practice, actually no practice is more like it, with haikus.. but yeah, abandon the haiku idea or remake this.. could be a damn good start for a better poem though. i wont vote on this for the moment.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › SupremeDreamer 8-Jul-03/12:39 PM Reply
It was more for Horus8's(or any other serious poet's) reaction of WTF. I know its not a Haiku, But I'm not ready to add to it yet, but Don't worry I will(Eventually).