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Priceless Moment (Haiku) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Counter culture on a bartop Three Private Eyes and Two Undercover Cops Busted, 5 years, Trafficing Stopped

SupremeDreamer 7-Jul-03/7:13 PM
Haiku.. ah, i never really had much practice, actually no practice is more like it, with haikus.. but yeah, abandon the haiku idea or remake this.. could be a damn good start for a better poem though. i wont vote on this for the moment.




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