| Re: Essential Love by unknown |
3-Jan-03/5:43 PM |
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What's with girls and poetry. Jesus christ I never saw Ezra Pound cover this material.p
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| Re: Come Back to Me by jlanza |
3-Jan-03/5:41 PM |
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why not...write a poem about it?
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| Re: Thank You Mom by savannah |
3-Jan-03/5:40 PM |
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Is your mom as handsome as me? I think not.I
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| Re: Tide by <~> |
3-Jan-03/5:39 PM |
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Seawall? Dyke? 4??////// YOU CHEATED ON ME IN DEED AND IN THOUGHT WITH ANOTHER WOMAN/
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| Re: Eight by amateurR |
3-Jan-03/5:38 PM |
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good work, you get a/.d d a a 8 no 9 no 10 no 9. NO u8! 9! OKAY 9!a
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| Re: Dream Walker by Tekara |
3-Jan-03/5:37 PM |
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You still feel 1onely don't you. Get it?? 1. Just kidding, 0.
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| Re: I Dig a Ponytail by Doris & Oats by w~* ATHENA *~w |
3-Jan-03/5:36 PM |
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Plaid Skirts are so fucking tired. Zero.d
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| Re: I Love You!! by Babieflirt |
3-Jan-03/5:35 PM |
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Dark Angel's new persona is amazing, good work.r
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| Re: Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit |
3-Jan-03/5:34 PM |
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nice to see something that isn't haiku. Care for a boku?
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| Re: Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal |
3-Jan-03/5:31 PM |
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This is aweful - not awesome.r
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| Re: I Retry My Resolve by Nicholas Jones |
3-Jan-03/5:30 PM |
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dogs -> dongs, and give it more of a punch at the end. Trust me I'm an expert.??
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| Re: Waking Up by PawnedTidal |
3-Jan-03/5:29 PM |
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| Re: None by poemreader |
3-Jan-03/5:26 PM |
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Which ways would that be?? By the way it's obviously your fault.
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| Re: Wanking by Bobjim |
30-Dec-02/4:30 PM |
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I don't think I can top this.??
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| Re: The spleenless poet by Bachus |
30-Dec-02/4:23 PM |
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RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR??
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| Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
23-Dec-02/9:23 PM |
"I'm speechless. I'm sorry, and I have no wish whatsoever to spark a
race war, but as a Brit this typifies what I hate about Yanks. Where is
your style? This is an absolute horror of a piece. 0, and for the first
time ever if I could give minus points I would. The worst piece of shit
I've ever read on this site. I can't believe a poem has been posted
going through the moon for inspiration. Not only that, but your
verses are completely and utterly uninspiring. The final line beggars
belief, and your use of the moon throughout and the various references to
the moon suggest that you are a child pretending to be an adult.
Awful. "l
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| Re: a comment on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 |
23-Dec-02/9:11 PM |
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Why is it a shame that I enjoyed a poem?? Seriously, it's very good. Very forceful - you can't help but feel that every word really means something.e
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| Re: a comment on Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz |
23-Dec-02/8:16 PM |
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ON A SECOND READING, I REALIZE I AM WRONG.A
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| Re: a comment on Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz |
23-Dec-02/8:16 PM |
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YOU FORGOT TO MENTION THE WOEFULLY INADEQUATE INCLUSION OF A COCKSUCKING THEMEr
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| Re: Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 |
23-Dec-02/5:34 PM |
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This is the best poem you've done - at least I enjoyed it more than any other you've done. By paring it down but avoiding minimalism you really more solidly strike the nerve that you fumble with in your more sprawling work. By the way, you might find my latest poem amusing.
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