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Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM (Other) by horus8 Winter grey dark light
ash smoke robin spring
summer love pain tear
lighthouse sea hate me
under cover sky breath
autumn mother dirt sleeve
wept current moon ring
year noon star sing
fish fowl sister hook
safe father camera wise
desert omen funny sad
river dawn train lies
bridge dog fire sleep
cover food bird tooth
pole cat outer wear
thumb nail cage booth
solar rubber soul gas
fly butter heart burn
plumber crack tape mouth
listen to the world turn.
Up the ladder:
Rich and the wall
Down the ladder:
Sins of your father
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.866667
Posted: December 23, 2002 4:04 PM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2002 4:31 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8825603 Overall Rank: 9946 Comments:
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-=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.72.252
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23-Dec-02/5:34 PM
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This is the best poem you've done - at least I enjoyed it more than any other you've done. By paring it down but avoiding minimalism you really more solidly strike the nerve that you fumble with in your more sprawling work. By the way, you might find my latest poem amusing.
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> -=SeTTle=-
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23-Dec-02/7:55 PM
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now that's a damn shame. i only put some thought into the title. isn't it.
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-=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.122.86
> horus8
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23-Dec-02/9:11 PM
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Why is it a shame that I enjoyed a poem?? Seriously, it's very good. Very forceful - you can't help but feel that every word really means something.e
i didn't start the fire...
good enough to take money from and fuck?
heh good job horus now, about the plaguristic crap I was wondering what these people were made of. that is fun.
they're t.s smelliot blow hards. i'd be careful they might take away your blue peter badge, and report you to the WMFOTW (wintermusefightersoftheworld).
Again, at my own peril, I liked it.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.
Oh my god, Becky, look at this truck driving idiot get on his knees and suck dick. Stop it now, be serious. I have a broken finger and it hurts to laugh. He is not insane; he is an insecure freak. If you were more observant, you would notice these things. But then again, you must be in the same uneducated boat sinking on Lake Superior.
what exactly is he insecure about again? Where his girl works? or his 'problems' all of them fantasies you've been programmed into believing. horus8, is no more or less insecure than any other user at poemranker. including and most of all you, our faithfull leader. Such poison tipped rebuttles? i feel almost moved to cry at this moment in time by your harsh tone sir! Don't mistake a return for a serve and call it 40 love home skillet, it's unbecoming and it makes your lip tremble and eye twitch. revolting really, you picking on that nice truck driver like that. tsk.tsk. you are an elitist shit-stain somewhere between the left shoulder of 'id' and the right nostril of 'ego'. but with the heart of a cock-a-roach. disgusting really, your attitude leaves little to be remembered.
If honesty equals dick sucking, then I'm guilty. Any thing else is just political verbal trash. Now all I need is a Cocaine account and an 8yr college diploma and I can be as perfect as any other C.E.O.
I almost thought you didn't write this... one sip short of a free keg.
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