Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Dec 2002 · Edited 23 Dec 2002 · 11 comments

Winter grey dark light ash smoke robin spring summer love pain tear lighthouse sea hate me under cover sky breath autumn mother dirt sleeve wept current moon ring year noon star sing fish fowl sister hook safe father camera wise desert omen funny sad river dawn train lies bridge dog fire sleep cover food bird tooth pole cat outer wear thumb nail cage booth solar rubber soul gas fly butter heart burn plumber crack tape mouth listen to the world turn.

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[10] -=SeTTle=- 23-Dec-02/5:34 PM Reply

This is the best poem you've done - at least I enjoyed it more than any other you've done. By paring it down but avoiding minimalism you really more solidly strike the nerve that you fumble with in your more sprawling work. By the way, you might find my latest poem amusing.

[n/a] horus8 › -=SeTTle=- 23-Dec-02/7:55 PM Reply

now that's a damn shame. i only put some thought into the title. isn't it.

[10] -=SeTTle=- › horus8 23-Dec-02/9:11 PM Reply

Why is it a shame that I enjoyed a poem?? Seriously, it's very good. Very forceful - you can't help but feel that every word really means something.e

[6] brazen 23-Dec-02/11:23 PM Reply

i didn't start the fire...

[n/a] w~* ATHENA *~w › brazen 24-Dec-02/12:18 AM Reply

good enough to take money from and fuck?

heh

good job horus

now, about the plaguristic crap

I was wondering what these people were made of.

that is fun.

[n/a] horus8 › w~* ATHENA *~w 24-Dec-02/12:23 AM Reply

they're t.s smelliot blow hards. i'd be careful they might take away your blue peter badge, and report you to the WMFOTW (wintermusefightersoftheworld).

[8] INTRANSIT 24-Dec-02/9:25 AM Reply

Again, at my own peril, I liked it.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.

[0] poetandknowit › INTRANSIT 24-Dec-02/1:53 PM Reply

Oh my god, Becky, look at this truck driving idiot get on his knees and suck dick. Stop it now, be serious. I have a broken finger and it hurts to laugh. He is not insane; he is an insecure freak. If you were more observant, you would notice these things. But then again, you must be in the same uneducated boat sinking on Lake Superior.

[n/a] Bachus › poetandknowit 24-Dec-02/2:07 PM Reply

what exactly is he insecure about again? Where his girl works? or his 'problems' all of them fantasies you've been programmed into believing. horus8, is no more or less insecure than any other user at poemranker. including and most of all you, our faithfull leader. Such poison tipped rebuttles? i feel almost moved to cry at this moment in time by your harsh tone sir! Don't mistake a return for a serve and call it 40 love home skillet, it's unbecoming and it makes your lip tremble and eye twitch. revolting really, you picking on that nice truck driver like that. tsk.tsk. you are an elitist shit-stain somewhere between the left shoulder of 'id' and the right nostril of 'ego'. but with the heart of a cock-a-roach. disgusting really, your attitude leaves little to be remembered.

[8] INTRANSIT › poetandknowit 24-Dec-02/2:28 PM Reply

If honesty equals dick sucking, then I'm guilty. Any thing else is just political verbal trash. Now all I need is a Cocaine account and an 8yr college diploma and I can be as perfect as any other C.E.O.

[9] SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/1:07 PM Reply

I almost thought you didn't write this... one sip short of a free keg.