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Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM (Other) by horus8

Winter grey dark light ash smoke robin spring summer love pain tear lighthouse sea hate me under cover sky breath autumn mother dirt sleeve wept current moon ring year noon star sing fish fowl sister hook safe father camera wise desert omen funny sad river dawn train lies bridge dog fire sleep cover food bird tooth pole cat outer wear thumb nail cage booth solar rubber soul gas fly butter heart burn plumber crack tape mouth listen to the world turn.

-=SeTTle=- 23-Dec-02/5:34 PM
This is the best poem you've done - at least I enjoyed it more than any other you've done. By paring it down but avoiding minimalism you really more solidly strike the nerve that you fumble with in your more sprawling work. By the way, you might find my latest poem amusing.




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