Re: I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8 |
18-Dec-02/2:55 PM |
Guys you make me sad when you fight so.
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Re: a comment on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum |
18-Dec-02/1:57 PM |
Doesn't exploit the inherent qualities of haiku very well. Not concrete enough. They say/With age comes wisdom,/retirement,/bingo - /then wings to fly there. Why not break it up. No need for a rigid, meaningless structure that has nothing to do with the poem. Normally I'd let it go but it seems so pained.s
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Re: Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum |
16-Dec-02/11:15 AM |
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Re: My Friend? by Blade |
16-Dec-02/9:31 AM |
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Re: My Friend? by Blade |
16-Dec-02/9:31 AM |
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Re: Hunt by cobalt |
16-Dec-02/9:31 AM |
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Re: Saviour by Mutant_X |
16-Dec-02/9:30 AM |
DUH NUH NUH NUH NUH NUH NUH NUHHHNHA NA???
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Re: Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8 |
9-Dec-02/4:58 PM |
1, these are haiku plural 2, i wrote a poem about you and i'd be honored if you read it which is to say i won't stop bothering you until you do because i love you and i want to have tons of babies with you and nobody but you and live with you etcetcetcwergfcerfderdfefd the damn thing scratched me as i was installinig a cat door
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Re: Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum |
8-Dec-02/9:01 PM |
tofu and chew. good work. SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO
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Re: A BACHUS MAN A MANY by Garrett S Sexton |
8-Dec-02/8:17 PM |
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Re: a comment on My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z |
8-Dec-02/7:50 PM |
If you were articulate you'd be terrifying.
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Re: a comment on The Yule tide log by ==Doylum |
8-Dec-02/7:06 PM |
I actually quoted that same song in a comment once.
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Re: a comment on Spider by Blade |
8-Dec-02/6:48 PM |
Oh and horus I just wrote a poem for you. It's meant to be a tribute although it may sound like I poke fun.
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Re: a comment on Spider by Blade |
8-Dec-02/6:46 PM |
for fuck's sake (yes that's an apostrophe, whatcha fucking gonna do?) Dave Grohl is not in the QOTSA. He is merely a friend of the band, a hanger on. He wanted to play on the album before this one and he was rejected. He got to play on this one because he's pretty much the best out there as far as talent and fame are concerned, and because he wanted to.
horus: the new qotsa song is "No One Knows". The older one I refered to is "feel good hit of the summer". You can get both on Gnutella (use Shareaza). But I encourage you to buy their music as they deserve your money more than most people.
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Re: a comment on Spider by Blade |
5-Dec-02/10:33 PM |
horus, that's an actual song by the queens of the stone age. It's a brilliant track entitled "Feel Good Hit of the Summer". I suggest you download it. It's very catchy. I listened to it at least 20 times today.
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Re: Spider by Blade |
5-Dec-02/2:26 PM |
VERSE: NICOTENE VALIUM VICODEN MARAJUANA ECSTACY AND ALCOHOL. CHORUS: C-C-C-C-C-COCAINE.
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Re: The North Wind by Ranger |
25-Nov-02/6:49 AM |
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Re: the devil in you by ciantu |
24-Nov-02/8:50 PM |
GOOD WORK KEEP WORKING WORKER
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Re: a comment on suicide lost the plot by T'ien |
24-Nov-02/8:48 PM |
I FOR ONE THINK YOU ARE FUNNY.
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Re: a comment on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss |
24-Nov-02/8:25 PM |
TEACHER TEACHER GIMME THE NEWS I GOTTA BAD CASE OF LOVING YOU. AND I'M GAY.
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