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the devil in you (Lyric) by ciantu
The Devils in you, What is your problem, Again and again, You kick my dog, Stop Kicking my dog. If you keep on i'll rub your nose in that poo, So what if it chewed up your favorite shoe, It chewed mine up too. Your such a retard Jim you'll never be my roommate again. You dog kicking Nazi Basterd

Up the ladder: Faith...
Down the ladder: Walter Cronkite

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.875
Weighted score: 5.235324
Overall Rank: 4190
Posted: November 21, 2002 4:42 PM PST; Last modified: November 21, 2002 4:42 PM PST
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[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Nov-02/10:24 PM | Reply
Bastard is spelled this way BASS-TURD! and i prefer to be called James. thanks.
[7] deleted user @ 212.219.142.161 | 22-Nov-02/4:08 AM | Reply
You should train the dog to kick back
[9] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 22-Nov-02/4:48 AM | Reply
Jim eats in Korean restaurants, atone the bastard after your dog goes for a piss dress it in his underwear while he sleeps, hes just jealous he cant lick his own bollocks and noone else wants too either

well done
[5] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.70 | 24-Nov-02/8:50 PM | Reply
GOOD WORK KEEP WORKING WORKER
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