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Faith... (Haiku) by loneshadow29
keeping his faith true hoping that things turn out right he's in for a shock

Down the ladder: the devil in you

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.875
Weighted score: 5.235324
Overall Rank: 4189
Posted: November 18, 2002 12:28 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2002 12:28 PM PST
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[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 18-Nov-02/12:34 PM | Reply
couldn't you write about trees or fishing or murder or something?
[n/a] loneshadow29 @ 63.80.251.73 > <~> | 18-Nov-02/12:51 PM | Reply
I could, but I don't think I'm shiny and happy enough to truly describe the peacefulness of a tree or fishing. I'm not dark enough to describe the brutalness of murder... I'm just f**ked up enough to be depressing :o)
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > loneshadow29 | 18-Nov-02/1:00 PM | Reply
what about bugs? you could write about forensic entymology--you know, what happens to our bodies after we die, or at least after we are immobile and exposed to insects--whichever comes first. that's fucking depressing enough for anyone.

see: http://folk.uio.no/mostarke/forens_ent/afterdeath.shtml
[n/a] Goose @ 152.163.188.72 | 18-Nov-02/1:13 PM | Reply
I like it !
[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Nov-02/1:37 PM | Reply
almost contemporary.
[7] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.47.34 | 18-Nov-02/9:14 PM | Reply
I DARE YOU TO HUFF SOME RUBBER CEMENT THINNER AND LISTEN TO KASHMIR AND MAKE YOUR MOM CRY
[n/a] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 > -=SeTTle=- | 19-Nov-02/6:43 AM | Reply
oh, settle! you're such a wiggly little snake!
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