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Haiku № 25571

Faith...

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Nov 2002 · 7 comments

keeping his faith true hoping that things turn out right he's in for a shock

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[n/a] <~> 18-Nov-02/12:34 PM Reply
couldn't you write about trees or fishing or murder or something?
[n/a] loneshadow29 › <~> 18-Nov-02/12:51 PM Reply
I could, but I don't think I'm shiny and happy enough to truly describe the peacefulness of a tree or fishing. I'm not dark enough to describe the brutalness of murder... I'm just f**ked up enough to be depressing :o)
[n/a] <~> › loneshadow29 18-Nov-02/1:00 PM Reply
what about bugs? you could write about forensic entymology--you know, what happens to our bodies after we die, or at least after we are immobile and exposed to insects--whichever comes first. that's fucking depressing enough for anyone.

see: http://folk.uio.no/mostarke/forens_ent/afterdeath.shtml
[n/a] Goose 18-Nov-02/1:13 PM Reply
I like it !
[8] Bachus 18-Nov-02/1:37 PM Reply
almost contemporary.
[7] -=SeTTle=- 18-Nov-02/9:14 PM Reply
I DARE YOU TO HUFF SOME RUBBER CEMENT THINNER AND LISTEN TO KASHMIR AND MAKE YOUR MOM CRY
[n/a] UnityMitford › -=SeTTle=- 19-Nov-02/6:43 AM Reply
oh, settle! you're such a wiggly little snake!