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suicide lost the plot

by T'ien

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Nov 2002 · Edited 8 Jan 2003 · 25 comments

its thrown to me in uncertainty as things go out of sync ive thrown my quilted memory and lose my will to think i lost my frozen time with you but could never displace the link with all this broken history we're still below the brink while losing all this slipping fear of time when you may leave i hold to me a pictured face and throw a heart from my sleeve your crystaline figure distorts as the mirror begins to greive the shattered beuaty weeps your name and your love is my wish to acheive Your gone from within me as a shell i clot but prospect frees me pure as suicide lost the plot

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25 comments

[7] ciantu 23-Nov-02/4:13 PM Reply
if it's true i feel for you
[n/a] T'ien › ciantu 23-Nov-02/4:19 PM Reply
it is something i just wrote in pure emotion and felt i needed it to be judged
[6] horus8 23-Nov-02/7:54 PM Reply
very mischevious, but your spelling is shit, i'm sure you've heard that before though huh?
[n/a] T'ien › horus8 23-Nov-02/7:58 PM Reply
wot is every1s obsession with spelling here does it really matter you no wot i mean lol ive only been on this site a few hours and already im noticing some childhood playground hierarchy (probably spelt rong also) heh mebbe your just a bunch of misfits who like to pretend their intellectual
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › T'ien 23-Nov-02/8:03 PM Reply
So who are you really?
[n/a] T'ien › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Nov-02/8:11 PM Reply
what do u mean im sure nobodody here nos who anybody is thats the beuaty of posting this on the internet
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › T'ien 23-Nov-02/8:15 PM Reply
No, really.
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Nov-02/8:24 PM Reply
Isn't me, I've had finals.
[n/a] T'ien › -=SeTTle=- 24-Nov-02/7:45 AM Reply
wtf are finals
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › T'ien 24-Nov-02/2:40 PM Reply
a collection of false hoops and #2 pencils, and it's not me neither.. even i am not this totally unoriginal, i'm unoriginally total.l
[n/a] T'ien › <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Nov-02/2:42 PM Reply
all right im lost wots going on wot was the question and are u saying im unoriginal and how is that
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- › T'ien 24-Nov-02/8:48 PM Reply
I FOR ONE THINK YOU ARE FUNNY.
[n/a] T'ien › -=SeTTle=- 25-Nov-02/12:58 AM Reply
thanks i think o well wotever
[7] cherish › T'ien 8-Jan-03/5:10 PM Reply
lmao I totally agree with the spelling lol
[10] Ranger 25-Nov-02/2:20 AM Reply
If anyone really needs to know, Lark Angel is Lark Angel and no-one else.
It's a bloody good song, but I thought there was another verse to it last time you showed me, LA. Or is it my memory remembering things that didn't happen?
[10] Ranger 25-Nov-02/2:21 AM Reply
Oh yeah, and 10/10
[n/a] T'ien › Ranger 25-Nov-02/2:28 AM Reply
your memory
[0] deleted user 25-Nov-02/6:11 AM Reply
i cudnt be bothewed to wead it, I dont like de title.hav a 0 for bein a pwetentious arse
[n/a] T'ien › deleted user 25-Nov-02/12:04 PM Reply
year well freddy your obviously a moronic retard that cant tell left from right i mean u wrote a poem about arnold schwarzenegger which i did read btw it was a load of crap
[10] deleted user 27-Nov-02/2:17 AM Reply
HEY Y'ALL ITS ME, CLETUS AGAIN, JUST THOUGHT ID ASK, ANY OF YOU SUBSCRIBE TO ANY GOOD GUN MAGAZINES? YOU ALL SEEM LIKE YOU WOULD THOUGH FOR DIFFERENT REASON TO ME!!!
[7] cherish 8-Jan-03/5:08 PM Reply
wow
[8] Bachus 8-Jan-03/7:45 PM Reply
"as a shell i clot" funny stuff..ahhh this isn't all that bad really...it's better the 5 or 6th tyme aruonde. mi tinks.
[10] Ranger 9-Jan-03/2:29 AM Reply
I'm going to give you a ten again, but you'll never make it to the top fifteen...well, you might, but you'll get voted straight out.
[0] lunar 12-Jan-03/1:57 PM Reply
i will give u a low mark to annoy u since i think i gave u a high one last time its stupid to post it again
[4] nentwined 4-Oct-06/5:46 PM Reply
the rhymes feel too forced, cheapening anything you might want us to take seriously. flow feels off in a number of places as well.