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peer pressure leads to awful outcomes (Free verse) by joey
your heart was warm
smile was bright
you sang during the day
and loved at night
but why when you were with
others you knew
did you act all cool
and tell them where to go?
to me you were kind
sometimes
you told me you loved me
hardly ever
the front you put on
was just so c***
but others found it funny
you followed your friends
at everything they did
didnt listen to others
who told you it was wrong
smoking became a habit
and drugs too
yet you always told me
it was the right thing to do
now do you believe me
when i said you would die
that it wasnt healthy
you were living a lie
do you believe me
now your dead
you should have listened to the voices around you
not those in your head!!!
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.142857
Weighted score: 4.769479
Overall Rank: 11391
Posted: December 3, 2002 3:04 AM PST; Last modified: December 3, 2002 3:04 AM PST
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