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peer pressure leads to awful outcomes (Free verse) by joey
your heart was warm smile was bright you sang during the day and loved at night but why when you were with others you knew did you act all cool and tell them where to go? to me you were kind sometimes you told me you loved me hardly ever the front you put on was just so c*** but others found it funny you followed your friends at everything they did didnt listen to others who told you it was wrong smoking became a habit and drugs too yet you always told me it was the right thing to do now do you believe me when i said you would die that it wasnt healthy you were living a lie do you believe me now your dead you should have listened to the voices around you not those in your head!!!

Up the ladder: suicide lost the plot
Down the ladder: Splendid Discovery

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.142857
Weighted score: 4.769479
Overall Rank: 11391
Posted: December 3, 2002 3:04 AM PST; Last modified: December 3, 2002 3:04 AM PST
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[3] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 | 3-Dec-02/1:10 PM | Reply
drugs, schmugs. excuse me while i go shoot up.
[n/a] joey @ 212.219.142.161 > UnityMitford | 4-Dec-02/4:35 AM | Reply
yeah, sounds normal!!!
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