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Essential Love (Other) by CharismaAllOver
I am still thinking of you at day,at night and I'm not going down without a fight,just to have your gentle touch would mean so much,it doesn't matter if you're far or near,an image of you does appear,just thinking of you gets me through the day and for that I will owe you,just thinking of you when a song comes on makes me feel like I'm going to get lost in you, you're the very best and from you I wouldn't expect anything less,you caress me and impress me,I know you're that special kind of guy that will protect me and respect me,when you're in pain that's what I feel and that's something I just had to reveal,when God made you ,God made love from high in heaven high above.

Up the ladder: Assassin's Song
Down the ladder: Mind of War

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.230769
Weighted score: 4.4376473
Overall Rank: 12911
Posted: September 18, 2002 4:52 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2002 4:52 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] Amelia @ 198.146.142.38 | 18-Sep-02/5:20 PM | Reply
Awwwwwwwwwwwww!
[n/a] Tibbs @ 67.84.171.10 | 8-Oct-02/10:46 PM | Reply
when i read this, i feel putrid all over. what treacly tripe.
[7] devina @ 217.70.229.39 | 10-Oct-02/2:36 AM | Reply
Very good poem... you must have been in love when you wrote this?
[5] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 10-Oct-02/2:39 AM | Reply
This comes over like a rap, good rhythms.
[7] ciantu @ 216.128.137.27 | 5-Dec-02/2:30 PM | Reply
pretty
[4] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 | 2-Jan-03/3:15 AM | Reply
it make s me look away to think how you might sway oh the pain we live make my mind leaky as a sieve oh god I know love can be a striking blow. I thought I'd survive it turns out to be a swan dive. With my heart of rock I trapse this world with that lonely flag unfurrled.
tyr more of my work please
[3] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.114.113 | 3-Jan-03/5:43 PM | Reply
What's with girls and poetry. Jesus christ I never saw Ezra Pound cover this material.p
[6] RGallet @ 140.186.49.215 | 7-Jan-03/7:51 PM | Reply
Fucking shut up. Seriously, ziparooni.
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