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The spleenless poet (Free verse) by Bachus
On an unspecific weekday in a not that trusted month a child was born half media with a name and brown bagged lunch His ears were warped and wobbly and his mouth was full of teeth On his belly was no button As his hair was combed and greased He spoke in pure heiroglyphics With a wrist bend and pinache They taught him that in art school just watch this monster mash He is a photoshop crusader with a visor, lance, and plume manufacturing girl scout cookies upon his glittered loom His friends were a dimed baker's dozen and they swore to god he was greater Since he could stretch a canvass with his bum while remaining a shoe horned fornicator Now you might be asking yourself What sweet jesus could it all mean? It really only boils down to this There's no poetry, with no spleen.

Up the ladder: Chalk
Down the ladder: Februarys mother

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.125
Weighted score: 5.302559
Overall Rank: 3666
Posted: December 30, 2002 3:40 PM PST; Last modified: July 26, 2003 8:33 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] -=SeTTle=- @ 67.30.181.129 | 30-Dec-02/4:23 PM | Reply
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR??
[n/a] Quarton @ 12.217.212.111 | 30-Dec-02/4:52 PM | Reply
Well, you have certainly written an original poem though, after reading it twice, I am unsure as to your intent and meaning. It is an interesting poem and I will wait until I have time to read it again before giving it a rating.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > Quarton | 1-Jan-03/1:01 PM | Reply
Just playing around with settle. you know? letting him kmow that 'i care alot'.
[n/a] RGallet @ 140.186.47.137 > Bachus | 7-Jan-03/2:14 PM | Reply
This was about me???
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > RGallet | 7-Jan-03/7:30 PM | Reply
you and darkangel combined into one ivy school closet case. asl?
[n/a] Bobjim @ 81.132.42.59 | 30-Dec-02/5:09 PM | Reply
Read my poems!
They're better than the crap you write!
(That means all of you fuckwits)
[8] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.180.140 > Bobjim | 27-Jul-03/11:21 AM | Reply
you looking to start a pissing contest? lol. your right, you write better, guess what.. I DONT GIVE A SHIT. btw, enjoy the odor of my feces on your front porch, and the little black/brown roses dropped apon your flowers. call me moses, the shit king.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 27-Jul-03/12:48 PM | Reply
Look psycho I wrote this poem to settle 6 months ago, and just did an edit recently, please, don't get paranoid on me.
[8] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.163.21 > horus8 | 27-Jul-03/1:13 PM | Reply
why am i a "sadist" and now a "psycho"? i mean yeah, my reply comes wayyy too late, but i was bored.. am i making you suffer btw? Because it makes me feel bad to be a sadist.. ;/
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 27-Jul-03/1:40 PM | Reply
Oh, okay, well by all means, carry on.
[n/a] SP REYNOLDS @ 66.81.185.85 | 4-Jan-03/8:17 PM | Reply
HA ha - you are my funniest friend.HM - poems that god said are good make the firmament softer...
Ornella, unfortunately - you are an idiot. That is the last compliment I will give you. Feel free to send what you need to send back to me to feel better. I can take it. I probably wont read it. Actually, I will print a copy of it and hang it on my bathroom wall. You must realize the world your in. In my highschool, the whole drama dept was running about squidaling the sqidalies. Do you think we have grown older or younger since then. Your not in Kansas anymore, Dorothy. Why not run on down to Leto's hous; maybe he'll let you hold his cum if you pay him enough to look in the same direction. If not I have a few pennies and I will also wish you luck in NC community theatre...or the church choir if the audition doesn't work out... licks - and good luck in your race for the Salibury Conservative pie bake. Say hi to tipper Gore for me. By the way, Navarro's not gay, he's a bisexual that perfers guys.
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