| Re: George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom |
4-Sep-07/4:41 PM |
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You've got that right! My son is also 25 and has been to Iraq twice and they want him to go a third? What is up with all that? I liked your poem.
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| Re: Feeling Like A Mask by wilco |
29-Aug-07/8:35 PM |
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| Re: Scurvey by horus8 |
27-Aug-07/12:00 AM |
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| Re: Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom |
26-Aug-07/11:59 PM |
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| Re: The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus |
26-Aug-07/11:59 PM |
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| Re: Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim |
26-Aug-07/11:58 PM |
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Nice feel to this Haiku. Beatiful thought it brings to me. Thanks.
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| Re: Scurvey by horus8 |
26-Aug-07/11:58 PM |
I didn't care for your wording in this one. Keep trying different styles.
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| Re: A Friend in the Night by Joi |
26-Aug-07/11:54 PM |
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I love this one! It says so much.
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| Re: Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom |
26-Aug-07/11:37 PM |
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Interesting. Waves of time is cool.
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| Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom |
26-Aug-07/11:37 PM |
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Very insightful words. My oldest son that is 25 now has been to Iraq twice now. God Bless him. I like this poem very much. Good description.
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| Re: Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8 |
26-Aug-07/11:13 PM |
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Short and to the point. Not suttle enough. Tone it down and add to it.
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| Re: The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8 |
26-Aug-07/11:12 PM |
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Not bad, needs a message? Ya think?
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| Re: The Critical and His Horse by MacFrantic |
26-Aug-07/11:11 PM |
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I liked the third line. Need an ending.
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| Re: Hurt by Cougarchic |
26-Aug-07/11:09 PM |
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| Re: Void and Vitality by MacFrantic |
26-Aug-07/11:08 PM |
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I liked the deepness of this.
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| Re: Stand by me by Cougarchic |
26-Aug-07/11:06 PM |
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I liked the ending verse. To plain need more of a messeage.
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| Re: Paid In Full by NoSage |
26-Aug-07/11:05 PM |
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It is true that they will find their way in time. I liked the thought put into this one. I didn't care for their father made the grade. I sounds to cocky. But all in all very interesting thought process.
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