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Life As a Boat (Haiku) by dougsoderstrom Entering upon the waves of time,
The wooden hull
Sinks.
Up the ladder:
on a more positive note
Down the ladder:
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Posted: September 18, 2002 1:52 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2002 10:52 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.779801 Overall Rank: 11327 Comments:
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bondjedi @ 12.228.115.70
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26-Sep-02/4:27 PM
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the ol' 9-3-1 haiku. of course!
I like this, but it doesn't really achieve anything on its own.
Dear Nicholas:
Perhaps not. I guess what I am saying is, like the old Buddhist saying, in being born, everyone of us has boarded a boat that will eventually sink (as in everyone of us will eventually die. Doug
how cold. excellent.
Wtf?
Bummer.
Interesting. Waves of time is cool.
very crisp. I liked it.
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