on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
26 Aug 2007, 11:59 PM
ok?
on Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom
26 Aug 2007, 11:59 PM
very crisp. I liked it.
on Hurt by Cougarchic
26 Aug 2007, 11:09 PM
very nice. A good read.
on Paid In Full by NoSage
26 Aug 2007, 11:05 PM
It is true that they will find their way in time. I liked the thought put into this one. I didn't care for their father made the grade. I sounds to cocky. But all in all very interesting thought process.
on Stand by me by Cougarchic
26 Aug 2007, 11:06 PM
I liked the ending verse. To plain need more of a messeage.
on Void and Vitality by MacFrantic
26 Aug 2007, 11:08 PM
I liked the deepness of this.
on The Critical and His Horse by MacFrantic
26 Aug 2007, 11:11 PM
I liked the third line. Need an ending.
on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8
26 Aug 2007, 11:12 PM
Not bad, needs a message? Ya think?
on Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8
26 Aug 2007, 11:13 PM
Short and to the point. Not suttle enough. Tone it down and add to it.
on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom
26 Aug 2007, 11:37 PM
Very insightful words. My oldest son that is 25 now has been to Iraq twice now. God Bless him. I like this poem very much. Good description.
on Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom
26 Aug 2007, 11:37 PM
Interesting. Waves of time is cool.
on A Friend in the Night by Joi
26 Aug 2007, 11:54 PM
I love this one! It says so much.
on Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim
26 Aug 2007, 11:58 PM
Nice feel to this Haiku. Beatiful thought it brings to me. Thanks.
on Feeling Like A Mask by wilco
29 Aug 2007, 8:35 PM
Interesting wording
on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom
4 Sep 2007, 4:41 PM
You've got that right! My son is also 25 and has been to Iraq twice and they want him to go a third? What is up with all that? I liked your poem.