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Fireworks on an Open Sky (Haiku) by capachijim Fireworks alight,
Filling up the endless dark,
And painting the sky.
Up the ladder:
The road to melancholy
Down the ladder:
only pleasure left
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Posted: December 6, 2003 7:19 AM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2003 7:19 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.5 Overall Rank: 691 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.116.54
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6-Dec-03/2:15 PM
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How many syllabols does the word fire have hick?
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Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177
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6-Dec-03/11:01 PM
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I use it as one or two. Whatever works in my favor.
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capachijim @ 24.168.26.48
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7-Dec-03/6:27 PM
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Fire has two, I'm sure. Fi-re. You could say it as one depending where you're from but where I'm from it's two. I wouldn't mess up on something so simple like a haiku's versing *no way*
That how i felt when I loved my only love at dawn.dimed all th lights the heat brought out the auras like fireworks.. But dark is not bad..as you wait upon the next heat in the tall savanah grass my tiger eyes dream and paint the sky with past lavender, blue,gold ,red as fire filled dawns. Thanks it's a 10
Nice feel to this Haiku. Beatiful thought it brings to me. Thanks.
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