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Haiku № 77202

Fireworks on an Open Sky

by capachijim

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Dec 2003 · 5 comments

Fireworks alight, Filling up the endless dark, And painting the sky.

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5 comments

[n/a] horus8 6-Dec-03/2:15 PM Reply
How many syllabols does the word fire have hick?
[n/a] Shuushin › horus8 6-Dec-03/11:01 PM Reply
I use it as one or two. Whatever works in my favor.
[n/a] capachijim › horus8 7-Dec-03/6:27 PM Reply
Fire has two, I'm sure. Fi-re. You could say it as one depending where you're from but where I'm from it's two. I wouldn't mess up on something so simple like a haiku's versing *no way*
[10] The_Third_Isis 6-Dec-03/8:11 PM Reply
That how i felt when I loved my only love at dawn.dimed all th lights the heat brought out the auras like fireworks.. But dark is not bad..as you wait upon the next heat in the tall savanah grass my tiger eyes dream and paint the sky with past lavender, blue,gold ,red as fire filled dawns. Thanks it's a 10
[8] Joi 26-Aug-07/11:58 PM Reply
Nice feel to this Haiku. Beatiful thought it brings to me. Thanks.