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Fireworks on an Open Sky (Haiku) by capachijim

Fireworks alight, Filling up the endless dark, And painting the sky.

The_Third_Isis 6-Dec-03/8:11 PM
That how i felt when I loved my only love at dawn.dimed all th lights the heat brought out the auras like fireworks.. But dark is not bad..as you wait upon the next heat in the tall savanah grass my tiger eyes dream and paint the sky with past lavender, blue,gold ,red as fire filled dawns. Thanks it's a 10




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