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Hurt (Free verse) by Cougarchic
How can I put into words what I feel Anger seems to be the most real Should I believe the stories I was told It's hard to think you could be so cold Each of you has a different tale One has to pass the other to fail So completely different only one can be true Unless it was a conspiracy between both of you A few days later it came to an end When your friend went for me and you went for my friend

Up the ladder: For my unborn
Down the ladder: Ivory, slaves and gold

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4315
Posted: April 30, 2004 9:37 PM PDT; Last modified: April 30, 2004 9:37 PM PDT
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[7] zodiac @ 67.240.155.10 | 1-May-04/8:18 AM | Reply
Do you think Johnny Cash singing a cover of Nine Inch Nails' "Hurt" is the funniest thing ever, or the coolest thing ever?

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[7] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 1-May-04/10:14 AM | Reply
Complicated, a riddle maybe. Like "This man's father is my father's son."
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.232.136 | 1-May-04/10:29 AM | Reply
what do you mean by 'real'.
[n/a] Joi @ 207.119.185.153 | 26-Aug-07/11:09 PM | Reply
very nice. A good read.
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