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Free verse № 99743

Hurt

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 Apr 2004 · 4 comments

How can I put into words what I feel Anger seems to be the most real Should I believe the stories I was told It's hard to think you could be so cold Each of you has a different tale One has to pass the other to fail So completely different only one can be true Unless it was a conspiracy between both of you A few days later it came to an end When your friend went for me and you went for my friend

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[7] zodiac 1-May-04/8:18 AM Reply
Do you think Johnny Cash singing a cover of Nine Inch Nails' "Hurt" is the funniest thing ever, or the coolest thing ever?

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[7] deleted user 1-May-04/10:14 AM Reply
Complicated, a riddle maybe. Like "This man's father is my father's son."
[n/a] richa 1-May-04/10:29 AM Reply
what do you mean by 'real'.
[n/a] Joi 26-Aug-07/11:09 PM Reply
very nice. A good read.